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CerealKiller
CerealKillerLv131yr
2022-12-25 18:19

I like the 2 different protagonists, not something I’ve seen before much, especially in apocalyptic novels I like that there is little grammatical errors I like the character development, first few chapters were exceptional I like the world background, 10 different worlds to write about sounds like a handful but I definitely hope to see you pull it off I like the update stability, around 14 a week is optimal Hoping to see more heroines that can hear is thoughts and use it in unique ways, although Aria is a a amazing character, the way she uses his thoughts is kinda bland. Hoping to see Elise and Rin falling in love, it would be kinda awkward to have to different protagaimsts going on different paths Although there hasn’t been,a completely lewd scene, the ones that are available now are definitely not disappointing Some referemce images for the main characters would definitely help with the immersion in the story This novel has tones of potential and I hope that you continue to write, your definitely a good author Merry Christmas btw

Shadow Monarch: Heroines Could Hear My Thoughts?!

LazyAngel
4.4
218 Chs

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LazyAngel
LazyAngelAuthor

Thank you so much for the review and merry Christmas. I will try to fix the mistakes you pointed out :) I'm still new to this type of stories so I try my best to learn everyday.

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