Review Detail of AllenCross in Demon King of Tyranny Anos Voldigoad in The Eminence in Shadow
Review detail
So let's get started. Writing quality is good (for now), Update rate is excellent (for now). And then there's the frustration. Plot development: banal, riding on the rails of canon to the point where we just fill in the action and dialogue from the Anime in one-to-one without change, with tiny inserts from the author (at this point and again not enough chapters to fully appreciate). Character design: well, the author has changed Anos, or rather his character, completely, he did not take the original as a basis, the main character lacks zest, he does not cling, does not intrigue. So far it's just a shell that just tells us that yes "I am Anos and I am present in this story". The rest: Sid and the rest are the same as in the Anime, zero changes at this point. Story : Well a very rare (at this point) chosen skeleton for a fanfic. Conclusion for a beer will do if there is nothing else to read.
Demon King of Tyranny Anos Voldigoad in The Eminence in Shadow
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Gabichu_Yeah:And the butterfly effect is so weak that the original story runs its course? I honestly think you should go to Google and look up what the butterfly effect is, Why don't you seem to know what it is if you think the story should be 90% the same as the original, if so I'd rather watch the original anime and not your fanfic
I don't like it when authors completely alter the storyline right from Chapter 1. It defeats the purpose of writing a crossover fanfic in the first place. Some writers even introduce dozens of new characters that are absent from both stories, which I find disappointing. To me, a good crossover fanfic is one that keeps 90% of the original story intact and only adds 10% of the butterfly effect brought about by the crossover characters. As the story progresses, the percentage can gradually increase until it evolves into an entirely new story.
Ridoux_Studio:I don't like it when authors completely alter the storyline right from Chapter 1. It defeats the purpose of writing a crossover fanfic in the first place. Some writers even introduce dozens of new characters that are absent from both stories, which I find disappointing. To me, a good crossover fanfic is one that keeps 90% of the original story intact and only adds 10% of the butterfly effect brought about by the crossover characters. As the story progresses, the percentage can gradually increase until it evolves into an entirely new story.image
And the butterfly effect is so weak that the original story runs its course? I honestly think you should go to Google and look up what the butterfly effect is, Why don't you seem to know what it is if you think the story should be 90% the same as the original, if so I'd rather watch the original anime and not your fanfic
Ridoux_Studio:I don't like it when authors completely alter the storyline right from Chapter 1. It defeats the purpose of writing a crossover fanfic in the first place. Some writers even introduce dozens of new characters that are absent from both stories, which I find disappointing. To me, a good crossover fanfic is one that keeps 90% of the original story intact and only adds 10% of the butterfly effect brought about by the crossover characters. As the story progresses, the percentage can gradually increase until it evolves into an entirely new story.image
tbh the point of writing a fanfic ti begin with is because you want to change the story on how you want it to go, by either by self inserting characters (which can be really boring sometimes because were just reading the anime but with a new character inserted) or by writing a new story the still have the background character, power system, maybe new character from other anime that was integrated to the story because why not if it fits the history.
Ridoux_Studio:I don't like it when authors completely alter the storyline right from Chapter 1. It defeats the purpose of writing a crossover fanfic in the first place. Some writers even introduce dozens of new characters that are absent from both stories, which I find disappointing. To me, a good crossover fanfic is one that keeps 90% of the original story intact and only adds 10% of the butterfly effect brought about by the crossover characters. As the story progresses, the percentage can gradually increase until it evolves into an entirely new story.image