This chapter just killed everything that was written in the early chapters of the story, from Issei's changed character, to his relationship with the group..... I don't see the point in reading any further.

Yeah, Issei's character and behavior is reverting to the original. The last 2 chapters are a complete disappointment, where is the coldness that was demonstrated in the beginning chapters.... Where's it gone?

Pfft, who's the other damage. Since the anime and manga itself blackfracture says that Minato sacrificed for the future of the village. Because he's the Hokage. Pahaha don't whitewash Minato, although yes as a father he's a moron, but as a ruler he's a hero.

Fuck, what the fuck was I reading that for.... It's a shame about the time I wasted.

Well noooo, not Karin as a romantic interest.....

Yeah, well, this story's turning into a rotten harem. Author put the harem tag so people like me don't waste their time, even those who don't like harems will settle for two girls max, but you're starting to go into the usual pokemon collecting. It's a total setup.

Let me guess you read that in some fanfic?) But the funny thing is, in the original story, she achieved the title on her own. Stop pulling fan-made theories that the original author of Naruto didn't confirm.

Yeah, I mean, the Hokage and Danzo are just shown to be stupid and blind, the fact that he defeated Jounin... That was completely ignored by all the superiors.... The world seems dead at the moment. There is no interaction between the characters. Strange that the Chinese author misses it, usually they have a lot of intrigue and interaction between characters, and here just zero.

Well, there goes the eye color uncertainty again.....

Not only is there no interaction between the characters at all in this story at this point, but just the same thing in every chapter repeating his actions and thoughts. It's a monumental set of powers and all the other adult characters are made retards in this story. It's a pity for the time spent. I will not put a grade, as it is just a personal opinion.

Zule Xiss, as a harem member, needs someone who can be aggressive and rebellious.

Honestly, the first thing that srazhu lowered for me the impressions of this story, this time skip in 5 years, as the author just crossed out the interactions between the characters at least it could be 2 chapters to stretch to the exam... The second one is very bland narration... In short, not so good.

Karin, Tenten, Ino sucks.

This story is acceptable, but with a complete lack of familiarization and character development, and with a budding connection early on, it feels more like a diary than a fanfic. However, that is secondary. The main issue is that this author has not completed a single short story (fanfic), which increases the risk of reading his works. Sadly, that is the case.

I, for example, envision Serena as Jennyfer from the witcher game and Igret as Tris)

Author although it's a small thing, all the faces in the images are similar and have minimal differences.))))

Well, the story is normal, but the absence of conversations, actions and thoughts of other characters has a negative effect. Because it does not allow you to immerse yourself in history, but leaves you feeling as if you are reading an essay "how I spent the summer".

Well, Ragnar had a team of brothers in arms, that's no less fair. I won't stop reading this story, because although I don't approve of Torfinai's decision to stay in England. But that doesn't make the story worse). Still, I'm just a reader, and a reader of free content at that. So I'm looking forward to the sequel).

The decision to stay on the mainland is ambiguous. First, how would he be able to prove his exploits and adventures? After all, in those days, the more people (the main thing is that they were also Vikings, not non-believers) saw your exploits, the more they believed in them. Who would believe an unbeliever and such. Secondly, I think you want to create a little drama because by the time he comes back, Rebecca might be married to the son of the Jarl and the girls might believe he's alive but also think he's dead since the raids happen once a year (sort of). All in all, I personally didn't like this maneuver.