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AspiringPedoLv41yr
2023-11-01 03:30

I like the plot of the story but the MC is really getting on my nerves, this guy is just TOO humble, to the point he looks like a dumb***/jack***….and he just ignorant sometimes too. There was a spy right in front of him and having a conversation with him, literally he wasn’t even hiding he was a spy that well, but the protagonist still didn’t clock it even though it was right in front of his face, literally. The grammar isn’t terrible but frequently words just don’t look right. Overall I have quite a few complaints about the novel but at least its not enough for me to drop it….yet Read up to chapter 31:

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Mistake_ForgivenLv12

tf is your name bud

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ur name gave me a good laugh

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