So far I'm only up to chapter 32, so not too far, but it already hit two red flags for me. If it hits another one I might drop it. The first is the writing style and quality. There are grammatical errors and autocorrected typos that sometimes make it hard to understand sentences or at least take you out of the flow of reading and the writing style itself is quite bland. It feels like there is no emotion behind conversation, though it gets better over time and might disappear at the paywall, idk.The second one is the "Daughter". Pick one. You can't have a parent/child or guardian/child relationship and a romantic relationship at the same time. That's just called grooming. It hasn't happened yet, but is very heavily hinted at and that's a big no-no, even if it gets resolved and goes nowhere.
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