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EG0Author2yr
2023-01-27 17:04

If you want to know my story, then you must learn I'm one of the very few Outworlders who came to your world for miscellaneous reasons. No, not those angelic beings dawned from heaven to dictate divine decree, obviously. Well, my exterior was a big giveaway. I was just one of those poor saps that got thrust into your world when a crazy practitioner screwed around with higher-dimensional laws. - - - So, I've decided it's about time to leave the obligatory 5star review. First, this is a story where the protagonist ascends and becomes a godly figure. Also, I will not convince you to read this story. I think a couple of chapters are enough for you to know if the story is for you. It is easy going in the beginning, but has a gritty theme and a blend of grimdark and humour. If you're still not convinced, then stick around for the memes, banter, and the wifus. . . Now for the reasons you'd STAY AWAY from the story - No Murderhobo (but there will be apocalyptic fights) - No Cartoonish Villains (cuz this ain't for kids) - No System Window (cuz the author doesn't know numbers)

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hot_papichuloLv15

Seems dope so far, so keep it up.how many chapter are u planning to write btw ?

EG0Author

I would like to say 1.5m words which would be closer to what I need to write everything I have in my mind. But from a business pov I would say around 1m mark. It could be more, it could be less.

hot_papichulo:Seems dope so far, so keep it up.how many chapter are u planning to write btw ?
_BLACKLv4

yeah author 1.5 m word how much is it in chapters I'm not good with numbers 😂

EG0:I would like to say 1.5m words which would be closer to what I need to write everything I have in my mind. But from a business pov I would say around 1m mark. It could be more, it could be less.
EG0Author

Around 1000, but the author doesn't know numbers, so it can be less or more

_BLACK:yeah author 1.5 m word how much is it in chapters I'm not good with numbers 😂
_BLACKLv4

😂

EG0:Around 1000, but the author doesn't know numbers, so it can be less or more
T_Qin_Wushuang_TLv4

hello author, it is a harem right ? and did you also right their night activities, you know. .. i will read this once i got an answer, thanks..

EG0Author

It is, and so far there's only a nightmare, but the book will have them eventually

T_Qin_Wushuang_T:hello author, it is a harem right ? and did you also right their night activities, you know. .. i will read this once i got an answer, thanks..
T_Qin_Wushuang_TLv4

nightmare? btw i will add this in library and read this later. thanks

EG0:It is, and so far there's only a nightmare, but the book will have them eventually
Arun_DewanLv4

No system Respect ++

PolygamyLv4

polygamy ?

EG0:It is, and so far there's only a nightmare, but the book will have them eventually
Jheydi327Lv14

Currently Chapter 10.. But all the Characters feels Bland and plain NGL.... All emotions feels like force.. Kinna bored reading this when MC speaks nonchalant..

EG0Author

Sadly, I can do nothing for you. you have two choices: drop the book or keep on reading. tbh, I'm pretty sure your mindset won't change you don't like slice of life.

Jheydi327:Currently Chapter 10.. But all the Characters feels Bland and plain NGL.... All emotions feels like force.. Kinna bored reading this when MC speaks nonchalant..
Jheydi327Lv14

Welp.. I kinda like the Slice of Life genre cause it's interesting.. But the emotions of every characters are plain, you might add some '?' or '!' and '!?' for some reaction to make the characters more like a living.. and execution of the story feels bland.. There's more things to improve

EG0:Sadly, I can do nothing for you. you have two choices: drop the book or keep on reading. tbh, I'm pretty sure your mindset won't change you don't like slice of life.
EG0Author

I don't like to use unnecessary signs, and I didn't know why you felt their exchange lifeless. first time getting criticism for that. Well, each human is unique, so your interpretation might be different from most people. But it's cool, for example, I have found the humour I like is insufferable to many.

Jheydi327:Welp.. I kinda like the Slice of Life genre cause it's interesting.. But the emotions of every characters are plain, you might add some '?' or '!' and '!?' for some reaction to make the characters more like a living.. and execution of the story feels bland.. There's more things to improve
KSATRIALv11

Is the photo on the cover the original character in the novel or not? btw they are super cool

EG0Author

The current cover? Well, there is a purple haired girl, but she isn't that gleeful or happy

KSATRIA:Is the photo on the cover the original character in the novel or not? btw they are super cool
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KSATRIALv11

I mean before that they were really pleasing to the eye lol, of course also the cover that you are currently using

EG0:The current cover? Well, there is a purple haired girl, but she isn't that gleeful or happy
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hello. I just found your book, is there any yuri? I hate that stuff. Hope you can give me some info. Thanks

EG0:The current cover? Well, there is a purple haired girl, but she isn't that gleeful or happy
EG0Author

there's none

Daoist_Culture:Hello. I just found your book, is there any yuri? I hate that stuff. Hope you can give me some info. Thanks
OdinsRavenLv15

pls go work on your othet book as I just got hooked

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TenthousandsunsLv14

So first something personal I've been reading novels for several years now and if anyone else has they understand how much harder it gets progressively to find something suitable. As most make, you want to blow your brains out haha. And I was about to give up on this one too in the early 30s and even took a little break to wait for more chapters, and I can say for a fact I'm happy I came back to read this, I honestly hope it gets the support it deserves I'm on chapter 163 so far and here are my thoughts. Writing quality: Excellent grammar and genuinely gives the feel of reading a work by an experienced author. Enjoyable read especially with emotion and even fights all suck you in. Stability of updates: I give it a 10/10 and I love it, the author works consistently and gets better with each chapter. Story development: Great pacing and actually interesting and original developments instead of the cookie-cutter stuff being forced down our throats usually:) At the start, I was a little bit skeptical but the story truly came into its own in the late chapter 70s. If we really think about it I'd rather have this unique setup because the results of its fleshing out have me eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Character design: Human. It sounds dumb but people behave like actual people, from using their brains to actually having a survival instinct and not 'courting death' in every chapter not to say dumb people don't exist and some people don't learn their lessons but reality really hits them like a truck which I love!!! . The side characters, I wouldn't even call them that cause you end up with a genuine interest in their story, I'd say there's an expanding main cast and key supporting characters. World background: I'd describe it as mysterious and unfolding, be it the locations or how the society is structured, a balance of being in a world where power is the law and opens more and more doors but also interesting beyond only being tied to power. In conclusion, I hope the author receives the attention and support this book deserves. And a note the mc is mature and smart and strong don't get him being injured messed up 'he's really him:) but more importantly, he is growing, this entire story is, and it's freaking beautiful.

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