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2022-12-05 03:25

It's a bit early but so far it's well written and interesting. I can't wait for more. [img=recommend]

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TenthousandsunsLv14

So first something personal I've been reading novels for several years now and if anyone else has they understand how much harder it gets progressively to find something suitable. As most make, you want to blow your brains out haha. And I was about to give up on this one too in the early 30s and even took a little break to wait for more chapters, and I can say for a fact I'm happy I came back to read this, I honestly hope it gets the support it deserves I'm on chapter 163 so far and here are my thoughts. Writing quality: Excellent grammar and genuinely gives the feel of reading a work by an experienced author. Enjoyable read especially with emotion and even fights all suck you in. Stability of updates: I give it a 10/10 and I love it, the author works consistently and gets better with each chapter. Story development: Great pacing and actually interesting and original developments instead of the cookie-cutter stuff being forced down our throats usually:) At the start, I was a little bit skeptical but the story truly came into its own in the late chapter 70s. If we really think about it I'd rather have this unique setup because the results of its fleshing out have me eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Character design: Human. It sounds dumb but people behave like actual people, from using their brains to actually having a survival instinct and not 'courting death' in every chapter not to say dumb people don't exist and some people don't learn their lessons but reality really hits them like a truck which I love!!! . The side characters, I wouldn't even call them that cause you end up with a genuine interest in their story, I'd say there's an expanding main cast and key supporting characters. World background: I'd describe it as mysterious and unfolding, be it the locations or how the society is structured, a balance of being in a world where power is the law and opens more and more doors but also interesting beyond only being tied to power. In conclusion, I hope the author receives the attention and support this book deserves. And a note the mc is mature and smart and strong don't get him being injured messed up 'he's really him:) but more importantly, he is growing, this entire story is, and it's freaking beautiful.

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