The author seems to be a newbie, the writing is good but the development and interactions are lousy. the protagonist's personality is arrogant and stupid while the rest are idiots (to make the protagonist look good) While the development only sees the protagonist treating all the original leads badly, which makes you wonder why he ended up with them if he hates them so much.
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It is explained why he doesn’t like rias a few times. He doesn’t lke her because she could have healed him and instead let him die to forcefully reincarnate him. The writer isn’ a newbie and you can tell by the writing quality, you just don’t like the development and so you call the writing amateurish. The writing is creative and new, I haven’t seen someone use kiba or his sacred gear in such a versatile way.
1. She was a child so that not good excuse and he know this. That also dose not explain hate for the others 2: that a opion 3: u like so u call it good. As you can see it an opion 4: that a opion 5: u have not dose not mean the other person have not
Everything in this Fanfic so far was taken from other Fanfics nothing was taken from the original material clearly the author hates DxD and has not read the original material.
Really? I’d like to read more fics where kiba’s sacred gear is used in more versatile ways. Can you give me some name?
if you hate this kind of development than don't read it read the orginal. And this is fanfic and dark version. If all other fanfic are same as orginal than what's the point of fanfiction. SO
Call it a dark version implies that the author even knows what the original version is, which he doesn't. That's the main problem.
What creative way? Using Knock off Zampaktu? That's creative? Man, just Google any Kiba fic, and it will have better ideas than this one. I'll give you a hand, a story called Dream Ou Loud on ff.net . Now to be fair, this story is very bad too, but as far as they could see, it's definitely more creative than this one.
Just read any fic that has Emiya Shirou in DxD and you get a better and more creative version lol.
