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He awakened them when he and hashirama had to separate, there are no specific ages mentioned but I’d assume like 10-13 range as they looked young but not as young as their sibling counter parts

He tweeted that shit like a year ago

That’s just not true though, kishimoto himself said that luffy has surpassed naruto by a bit, as in one of the strongest person in Naruto verse is weaker than upper strength person one piece. He’s stronger and faster that’s all you really need in both verses to win. All the otsutsuki have is fancy abilities that’s it

Writing quality 2/5 Update stability 3/5 Story development 2/5 Character development 1/5 World backround 3/5 Shit isn’t good gang, the mc is mad cringe. Forget that first off there isn’t any structure to the mcs ability, it seems like the mc as a whole is the issue. He looks like kakashi so the mc reasons that he has all of kakashi abilities, ah yes a reasonable assumption. wtf, no. Then there is mad stupid ass shit too build up the mcs character but it doesn’t accomplish that at all, like why even write some of this shit. It’s mad unnecessary, like he had the mc go to a job interview and had the mc go hungry to find out that he can last 3 days without food and still be decent. Suprise us normal people can do that too, it’s not special. It doesn’t establish him as supernaturally sturdy. All the interaction are weird and just cringey, I honestly don’t even know where to start in describing this problem. Frankly this is a horrible fic that disgraces kakashi as a character might as well have done a reincarnated in jjk with a sharigan, and made the character a cliche white haired teen. The mc doesn’t follow kakashi personality or bearing or ability beside the sharigan, just copying the edgy mask, but that shit is corny without the bearing and nonchalance to back it making it “cool”. The quality of the writing isn’t good either, a lot of grammatical errors.

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I fucking love doctor who, at least until the new season that’s dropped, regardless I’m enjoying this story. As a whole without bias it’s not that good, the mc lacks depth and their is a huge lack of dialogue as a whole. Though the author is adding onto the lore and creating his own world so I’m like it. Therefore there is world building onto a well developed world, the regular updates are also nice.

Indeed but the mist village is broken af too, they have multiple elemental kekkai genkai along side physical kekkai genkai like turning into water and the bone one too and 7 special ninja swords the can make jonin elite jonin by using them, plus they live on an island so their resources and land has extra protection to bring attacked. If not for the author and obito the mist would’ve been one of if not the strongest

Which is why he said it was troublesome