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Riku3055
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2024-02-24 20:15

After 6 months of break, I decided to write this fanfic further. I'm not sure how many people will be reading this, but well, I wanted to, regardless of writing another review, expressing my thoughts.  I'll be focusing slightly more on the romance now, since I'm a huge Hiyori simp, and I like her. So the latter chapters that I'm writing now, in other words, Volume 3, will be like that.  There are also mind-games or feats of intelligence displayed by him, but without reading it further, you won't see them.  Kurushima does a couple of special things in the Inhabited Island Exam and the Zodiac Exam, but for that, you'll have to read it from the beginning.  With special, I also mean, special.  Anyhow, I like mind-games, so there'll be a focus on that, the romance, the dynamics between the characters, and Kurushima's goal, revenge.  I'm writing this fanfic since I'm pretty interested in it, after all.  But I also want to ship Hiyori and write chapters of her and Kurushima, so there's my other essential reason.  If you're a Hiyori Simp like me, well, you're lucky, I guess.  I'll also be doing AI Arts now, more or less, of her. For the future chapters, that is, since the early ones, are published already. If you could leave me a comment or review here or there, what you think of the fanfic, it'll be greatly appreciated.  Well, anyway, that'll be all.  Hopefully, it does suit your liking, If not, well, I can't do anything about that in particular.

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MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

I really like the mind games and stuff like that. So hearing that you will implement such scenarios already got me interested. Imma give it a try

Riku3055
Riku3055Author

I'm glad to hear that. I think the strategies I made are more than decent enough and are based on reality, much. The first more or less extraordinary feat is at Chapter 6. Since Vol. 1 doesn't have special exams, there aren't as much here, in particular. They'll come later, though, in Vol 2.

MrIIIo:I really like the mind games and stuff like that. So hearing that you will implement such scenarios already got me interested. Imma give it a try
Riku3055
Riku3055Author

I don't intend to drop it. It's just that the updates might get less frequent, perhaps, since I'm also sometimes revising and slightly rewriting chapters new. Technically, I just overlooked the Island Exam, and made things more clear, in regards of Kurushima's strategy and co.

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God_Hand_2008
God_Hand_2008Lv1

Okay, looking forward to it 😀.

Jonathan4star
Jonathan4starLv15

I have no clue she is explain

Riku3055
Riku3055Author

A girl from the anime/manga/light novel Classroom of the Elite. She's in a different class, but she's also the love interest of the MC.

Jonathan4star:I have no clue she is explain
Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

this is single female lead? (only 1 gf)

Riku3055:A girl from the anime/manga/light novel Classroom of the Elite. She's in a different class, but she's also the love interest of the MC.
Riku3055
Riku3055Author

Yes, it's a single romance. I don't like harem, really.

Yuki_55:this is single female lead? (only 1 gf)
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Riku3055
Riku3055Author

Perhaps I should have done a small note beforehand I had written this fic to inform the readers what to expect. Well, my bad, but I'll be doing them now. Read with care because these aspects mentioned here will be spoilers. However, they will also be explaining everything in a more concise manner about the fic. Firstly, the theme of this novel is revenge and will be resolving about revenge, what's right and wrong, when is something justified, and so on, that you'll be able to figure out with reading the fanfic further. Secondly, in this fanfic, there will be some aspects of the political regime about classroom of the elite mentioned, and will also be a major factor in the fic. Thirdly, unlike many other classroom of the elite fanfic's, the MC won't care whether to advance up to Class A or staying in Class D, as long as his revenge is secured. If a higher class position aids the help with his revenge, then he'll aim for Class A. All that is under the premise that being in a higher class would also simultaneously raise his influence and popularity, which is useful for his singular goal of revenge. Fourth, Kurushima is a person with highly manipulative abilities, using whenever an opportunity of a situation arrives the chance of manipulating other people so that they'll do what he wants. Fifth, for people who have read the first few chapters, you'll recognize that Kurushima’s attitude towards the girls is rather submissive, not defending himself when they want to go with him shopping, and so on. As I mentioned it a bit already above, the main theme of this novel is revenge, and Kurushima’s only goal of visiting the school is because of his desire for revenge, wanting to figure out the culprit of his families death, visiting out of that solemn reason the school since a clue has lead him here about a person who might be associated with the death of his family. Sixth, whenever there will be something seen about his past, I'll be writing in the headlines 'Flashback Chapter' so just to clarify that here. Seventh, the romance interest of this fic will be Hiyori, and it'll be non-harem. Eight, I'll be using some literary devices, such as symbolism, metaphors, a foil per example, and more. There'll be also foreshadowing, too, in some specific chapters. Nine, perhaps this is something that will be making people more hyped, but Ayanokoji will be the Deuteragonist and Antagonist in this fanfic. Tenth, many chapters require to read the chapters after that chapter, too, for understanding the priory chapters. Per example, you won't understand Chapter 5: ...or not, Chapter 7: Plan set in motion, without reading Chapter 8: Plan, of how he was able to expel three people, gaining their Private Points, and using that situation to his advantage. Also, I might be rewriting Chapter 5: ...or not, in the near future, since it wasn’t really according to my taste, if I had to describe it. But those are for now the things I wanted to say. If you have any questions, such as about the strategy used in Chapter 8: Plan, or anything else regarding the fic, or about Kurushima himself, I'll try my best to answer them if they are questions I can answer, without spoiling what will happen in the future. Also, before I forget it, eleventh, comedy is in many chapters also included, because why not? Ok, that will be all. If I ever have something to add, I'll be writing them here under the review. Also, since I am shameless, I will follow the trend on this platform about rating your own novel with five stars.

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