If you're hesitating to read this fanfic, don't hesitate, dive in and read it because you won't regret a thing. This is one of the best COTE fanfics you'll come across, personally, it's the best and my favorite. With each chapter, the story gets better, leaving you eager to read more and more, eagerly awaiting each upcoming chapter. All the characters are very well portrayed, unlike other fanfics, the secondary characters aren't made extremely stupid or hateful to make Kurushima (MC) stand out. It doesn't have a harem, which is something to appreciate, it's becoming rarer to find stories centered on a single couple, in this case, Hiyori (Thank you for that, i love Hiyori), one of the best girls in COTE. Personally, I really like the fact that unlike other fanfics where the protagonist is OP and has an easy life, here it's shown that although Kurushima is certainly OP too, his life is not and will not be easy, and he will face many difficulties. I encourage the author to keep writing this great fanfic because I love what they're doing with it, and I hope to someday see this story completed. I'm sorry if the english isn't good, i made this review using a translator.
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Thank you very much. I never regarded my fanfic as one of the best, but hearing that anyone thinks like this makes me really happy. Initially, I just tagged with the idea along of creating a rather more unique OC since I had read so many fanfics where nothing overly interesting happened. The theme revenge looked at that time unique since I never saw it, either on Wattpad or anywhere else, so I decided on making this fanfic, then. Personally, I really love to write the mindgames. But I'm also not trying to make any pull out of nowhere. Strategies of Kurushima always rely on logical reasoning, or something easily possible, like the Island Exam, which, however, is almost impossible to figure out, literally, for any character with their given information. As for the harem, I never really liked it. It's just my own preference, I suppose. Also, relationships never feel genuine between characters with harems. I made Hiyori's and Kurushima's genuine, and I like to write them. As for Kurushima's future... well, there's still much to see. One remaining Flashback Chapter, and a few other plot twists. Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it. And don't worry, your English is more than okay. I hope my English is good enough because I constantly get autocorrected for my native language.
Indeed, i've never seen a fanfic with revenge as the main theme, so it's very original from the very foundation of the story, which speaking of, it will be very interesting to see Hiyori's reaction when she discovers Kurushima's objectives. Regarding the harem, I completely agree with you. And although I'm not one to judge, I'd say you don't have to worry about your english either.
Riku3055:Thank you very much. I never regarded my fanfic as one of the best, but hearing that anyone thinks like this makes me really happy. Initially, I just tagged with the idea along of creating a rather more unique OC since I had read so many fanfics where nothing overly interesting happened. The theme revenge looked at that time unique since I never saw it, either on Wattpad or anywhere else, so I decided on making this fanfic, then. Personally, I really love to write the mindgames. But I'm also not trying to make any pull out of nowhere. Strategies of Kurushima always rely on logical reasoning, or something easily possible, like the Island Exam, which, however, is almost impossible to figure out, literally, for any character with their given information. As for the harem, I never really liked it. It's just my own preference, I suppose. Also, relationships never feel genuine between characters with harems. I made Hiyori's and Kurushima's genuine, and I like to write them. As for Kurushima's future... well, there's still much to see. One remaining Flashback Chapter, and a few other plot twists. Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it. And don't worry, your English is more than okay. I hope my English is good enough because I constantly get autocorrected for my native language.
I'm not sure if she'll discover them. He's been honest with her for the entire time, so I suppose he would be too, again. Although knowing Kurushima, he wouldn't want to drag her into his mess, too... so I'm still quite uncertain.
ShinZaker:Indeed, i've never seen a fanfic with revenge as the main theme, so it's very original from the very foundation of the story, which speaking of, it will be very interesting to see Hiyori's reaction when she discovers Kurushima's objectives. Regarding the harem, I completely agree with you. And although I'm not one to judge, I'd say you don't have to worry about your english either.
