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2024-02-03 18:40

Everything here is written well. To be honest I thought you dropped it kind ruin my day when that happened last time plz don’t do it again…………….. ……

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Thanks, I really appreciate it. I never thought of myself as a good writer, but seeing that so many people like this fic makes me kind of happy. I thought it was a failure, to be honest, since the first chapters aren't really something I did a good job with. But anyway, thank you once again. I really appreciate it. I'll make sure to write this fic further.

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Perhaps I should have done a small note beforehand I had written this fic to inform the readers what to expect. Well, my bad, but I'll be doing them now. Read with care because these aspects mentioned here will be spoilers. However, they will also be explaining everything in a more concise manner about the fic. Firstly, the theme of this novel is revenge and will be resolving about revenge, what's right and wrong, when is something justified, and so on, that you'll be able to figure out with reading the fanfic further. Secondly, in this fanfic, there will be some aspects of the political regime about classroom of the elite mentioned, and will also be a major factor in the fic. Thirdly, unlike many other classroom of the elite fanfic's, the MC won't care whether to advance up to Class A or staying in Class D, as long as his revenge is secured. If a higher class position aids the help with his revenge, then he'll aim for Class A. All that is under the premise that being in a higher class would also simultaneously raise his influence and popularity, which is useful for his singular goal of revenge. Fourth, Kurushima is a person with highly manipulative abilities, using whenever an opportunity of a situation arrives the chance of manipulating other people so that they'll do what he wants. Fifth, for people who have read the first few chapters, you'll recognize that Kurushima’s attitude towards the girls is rather submissive, not defending himself when they want to go with him shopping, and so on. As I mentioned it a bit already above, the main theme of this novel is revenge, and Kurushima’s only goal of visiting the school is because of his desire for revenge, wanting to figure out the culprit of his families death, visiting out of that solemn reason the school since a clue has lead him here about a person who might be associated with the death of his family. Sixth, whenever there will be something seen about his past, I'll be writing in the headlines 'Flashback Chapter' so just to clarify that here. Seventh, the romance interest of this fic will be Hiyori, and it'll be non-harem. Eight, I'll be using some literary devices, such as symbolism, metaphors, a foil per example, and more. There'll be also foreshadowing, too, in some specific chapters. Nine, perhaps this is something that will be making people more hyped, but Ayanokoji will be the Deuteragonist and Antagonist in this fanfic. Tenth, many chapters require to read the chapters after that chapter, too, for understanding the priory chapters. Per example, you won't understand Chapter 5: ...or not, Chapter 7: Plan set in motion, without reading Chapter 8: Plan, of how he was able to expel three people, gaining their Private Points, and using that situation to his advantage. Also, I might be rewriting Chapter 5: ...or not, in the near future, since it wasn’t really according to my taste, if I had to describe it. But those are for now the things I wanted to say. If you have any questions, such as about the strategy used in Chapter 8: Plan, or anything else regarding the fic, or about Kurushima himself, I'll try my best to answer them if they are questions I can answer, without spoiling what will happen in the future. Also, before I forget it, eleventh, comedy is in many chapters also included, because why not? Ok, that will be all. If I ever have something to add, I'll be writing them here under the review. Also, since I am shameless, I will follow the trend on this platform about rating your own novel with five stars.

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