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Ole_TessmannLv46mth
2024-08-28 12:50

I Honeslty really liked the premise of the story. The wishes would make her op but not instantly and it’s also not some system bs. I know the author is probably not a native English speaker but the grammar and wordings are so bad sometimes that it’s hard to read.. losing all immersion in the story. Sometimes it’s alright but sometimes it’s hard to even understand what is going on. I’d suggest just having an ai look over it and fix all those small little mistakes. It would surely make the story a lot better!

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