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FalsicLv151yr
2024-02-20 16:06

This would've been a lot better without the reincarnation. There would be fewer inconsistencies in her personality. The author places a heavy emphasis on drama, which can be overwhelming when it's done without a solid foundation. Danzo, for example, doesn't know how to be stealthy in this. He's a visual presence that confronts people directly, whereas he could just take a medical sample, confirm his theories in private, and act according to the situation. I think it can be summarized as ' the author is passionate, but doesn't have enough understanding of politics and human interactions to make drama feel natural'. I just can't keep reading it, but I hope the author the best.

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IrosAuthor

Thank you for giving it a try.

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