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Jaquaviontavious
JaquaviontaviousLv142yr
2022-10-23 11:45

Unbelievable. I have a huge problem with this book. It’s that you haven’t made it sooner…because if you did, I would’ve known how good you are at bad writing. And when I say “Bad” I mean Micheal Jackson Bad. You know how he looked really, really bad at the end of his life?…….Whats that? You don’t know if I like this or not? The author should delete everything he has in his notes and destroy his online presence. Because he should be hired by the best authors in the world to ghost write their books, and become globally recognized as the best author in the world. …Just not any world I’d want to live in. Because im jealous….at your ability to not give a care about the stuff you write. This book is not fit for human consumption….No! This should be read by a higher life form with more complex mental capabilities and intelligence. ….But also a altruistic drive to eradicate books like the ones this author puts out. Joking…NOT! YOU DESERVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! So you wont have to live in a world where you will never exceed what you have made here. In conclusion….. I mean its JManM writing this, what did you expect? Overall greatness of course… Or is it? Perhaps you should just read it. (Spoilers: ultra level work right here)

In Cyberpunk With Fallout System

JManM
4.8
60 Chs

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JManM
JManMAuthor

What a rollercoaster, choom.

2yr
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Kevin_Pollard
Kevin_PollardLv4

uhh... nova?

2yr
13
KissMyGloriousAxe
KissMyGloriousAxeLv14

Reading this while stoned is quite the experience- Might have become a higher lifeform myself; if it went on any longer.

JManM:What a rollercoaster, choom.
2yr
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shadowpixel
shadowpixelLv14

keep your demons away

2yr
8
Whitestair_Ivory
Whitestair_IvoryLv4

Is that the SNS skit? I've seen this skit on YouTube a parody of cooking shows.

2yr
14
AtticusChea
AtticusCheaLv14

Key and Peele Skit.

Whitestair_Ivory:Is that the SNS skit? I've seen this skit on YouTube a parody of cooking shows.
2yr
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AndellOfficial
AndellOfficialLv13

I'm most annoyed it took this long to find out you made another novel! You're doing God's work. I haven't disliked anything you written and I've read all there was to read soo keep doing what you're doing and it'll be another fantastic book.

JManM:What a rollercoaster, choom.
2yr
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JManM
JManMAuthor

Thanks choom. I always put in the effort get the most I can put of a setting. Don't want to spend my time doing rewrites.

AndellOfficial:I'm most annoyed it took this long to find out you made another novel! You're doing God's work. I haven't disliked anything you written and I've read all there was to read soo keep doing what you're doing and it'll be another fantastic book.
2yr
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Yodathink
YodathinkLv4

choom i think u broke my brain

2yr
carrotpie
carrotpieLv5

I don’t even know what he was saying. This dude gotta work on his English, especially before he starts Insulting the author .

2yr
carrotpie
carrotpieLv5

Wait nevermind I read a couple kind past, I miss the days when I could delete my comments .

carrotpie:I don’t even know what he was saying. This dude gotta work on his English, especially before he starts Insulting the author .
2yr
carrotpie
carrotpieLv5

Lines*

carrotpie:Wait nevermind I read a couple kind past, I miss the days when I could delete my comments .
2yr
Leinar32
Leinar32Lv6

Key & peele?

2yr
The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

Gordon remsay?

2yr
DuanFlyingOverLing
DuanFlyingOverLingLv14

Bruh...

7mth
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IMightBeGod
IMightBeGodLv3

What a synopsis, like seriously rags to bitc*es? That’s some funny stuff 😂

2yr

AinzO0alGown
AinzO0alGownLv14

The writing seemeed familiar Io and behold it was the god emperor of krogankind himself

2yr
Project_Traveler
Project_TravelerLv14

yeah Fallout. . . . .. ...............

2yr
Zaelum
ZaelumLv5

Pretty Good!!, Harem or not, I like anyway. Hopefully we get to see an end to this one! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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Martyrous
MartyrousLv15

so far love the story dude but on a side note when are you going to write something new about everyone's favorite Big Chunga Space Lizard Chad and ultimate Krogan God of blood and metal?

2yr
Alstor
AlstorLv3

Just wow. I love these type of fanfics. This I simply a work of art. GLORY TO THE BIG JUAN

2yr
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

"Shut up and take my stars choom!" x x x xv Jman fans 2077.

2yr
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Yooooo! Dude It's like your reading my mind. when I was in for an Invincible mood, not two days later you wrote a fic about it. Now I'm in Cyberpunk mood for nearly two weeks and suddenly I thought "Maybe I should go and check in on my man, Jman and BAM!. New Fic with a Genre that I was currently obessing over

2yr
Mercur212
Mercur212Lv5

Honestly great work the story, characters whole writing style not to mention it is rare to see good overpowered character that isn't just wish fulfillment and if you like this story then I can only advise to check out authors other stories.

2yr
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