AtticusChea

Ok author….we already known the name of the five elders…why can’t you just correct it before posting?

Dude I don’t care if you only wrote 4 chapters a week…as long as you keep this story up that all that matters.

Cerci next.

From the new Superman movie.

Tour No both/harem plz.

It’s not pink, it’s Magenta.

Yes! Say no to harem.

What I dislike most about your story is that every MC of your are too trusting, too goody two shoes. Take this story for example….it start of so good but turn to terrible after the MC meet the X-Men and the Avenger. Now I don’t mean that I want you to write an anti hero story but make the MC have more depth, more personality instead of just being a “good guy”

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This is a plot issue…yes Iron Island have slave but people tend to ignore them because of the culture of the Iron Island. However Tarth is different, and nothing can cover up the MC bought slaves…you think people on the Island wouldn’t snitch on you just because you make their life better? But the religion of the Seven doesn’t allow slaves so some of the religious zealots WILL snitch. And the MC is not strong enough to fight the might of the 6 kingdoms. This is such a big plot issue that ruin the story. It’s might be better if you explain that you bought slave but you free them and paid them for their work instead of saying that nobody gonna know because this is an island.