This is a plot issue…yes Iron Island have slave but people tend to ignore them because of the culture of the Iron Island. However Tarth is different, and nothing can cover up the MC bought slaves…you think people on the Island wouldn’t snitch on you just because you make their life better? But the religion of the Seven doesn’t allow slaves so some of the religious zealots WILL snitch. And the MC is not strong enough to fight the might of the 6 kingdoms. This is such a big plot issue that ruin the story. It’s might be better if you explain that you bought slave but you free them and paid them for their work instead of saying that nobody gonna know because this is an island.

It’s not bad but there is a big plot issue with the slaves…Westeros doesn’t accept anything that have to do with slaves. No selling and no buying slaves. So the fact that somehow the MC “bought” slaves doesn’t make sense.

But this is a plot hole….because the MC is just an enhanced human…his Xgene is not activated. Professor X can tell the difference between human enhanced and Mutant, same with Beast if he have the MC DNA.

Same, I basically guess that this will happen since the MC practice chakra at 5…This IS Konoha…Danzo and Sarutobi have eyes everywhere. It’s like the MC never watch “Naruto” Sorry Author, I like your other novels but I’m dropping this one. I’m not saying it is bad, it’s just not for me.

Plz don’t let the MC work with SHIELD.

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No…

4 is not a harem? I thought it's gonna be just 2 lovers, but 4 is a harem. Sometimes stories that are good was ruined by harem, because the author doesn't know what to write anything interesting with all those lovers. At some points it becomes a "to catch em all"

what is your patreon? I can't find it

this is a translation, and the original only has 79 chapters so far, so don't expect much.

really? i think it below 6/10 for me, but to each their own.

I take it back, since this time she was not raise by the septa...so maybe this Sansa is better.

Sansa is a terrible choice.

3 chapters in a week... I didn't know Christmas came early this year 🥳

thank you for the chapter 🙏 I like this fic more than the GOT one I have to say.

The story goes downhill after chapter 18... The MC is way too smart (not in a good way) as every research of his can be accomplished in less than a week or two at the most. He can just take a quick look at ANY technology and boom 💥 he can perfect it and improve on it. Also, many of the MC plans don't make sense.

Updated after Chapter 15: Seriously I was hoping that the MC will get better over time but to my disappointment, he does not. The only thing I like about the MC is when he calls out Captain America for being a hypocrite. He keeps saying he is a God but also keeps reminding people that he can be killed. I'm sorry author, I don't want to talk badly about the novel...the concept was good but the way you portrayed the MC ruin this story.

you have to take into account that at this point in time Hades hasn't been betrayed by Zeus yet...Current Hades and future Hades are different, something change when you live for ten thousand years with bitterness.

Really I don't like the MC's personality, at least for now (chapter 10) he is so indecisive and doesn't know what he wants to do. I know he's young and still naive but I hope he can grow out of his naivete quickly.

Mycella has to be at least 12 years older than Atlas.