Item: MMORPG : Ancient WORLD
Rating: 4.8
Author: The_last_Guardin

The_last_GuardinLv151yr

2023-06-23 06:59

great story that uses the vr game as a base isnt really a novel of the type it actually reads more as a syatem in a fanatys world novel which is great as it makes it more enjoable in my opinion theres a lot of forshadowing of great things to come as of chapter ~200. Overall a grear read can only recomend

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