Item: MMORPG : Ancient WORLD
Rating: 4.6
Author: ShadowSage

ShadowSageLv111yr

2023-05-02 21:02

Great story and world building. But MC character isn't my favourite. classes and skills are the best I have seen in any novel. keep going forward.

MMORPG : Ancient WORLD

Aibek

4.4

583 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies5

ThefantastictouchLv4

I'm currently at chapter 19 and have trouble going on for the same reasons . Please, could you tell me if the Mc becomes more interesting in the future ?

1yr

ShadowSageLv11

No. MC is actually an idiot with plot armour and unnecessary involvement in other people's business . MC dreams of creating an organization with high power in the game world so he involve with some messy and dangerous people. But he always escaped with dumb luck. Except MC the game elements are top class.

Thefantastictouch:I'm currently at chapter 19 and have trouble going on for the same reasons . Please, could you tell me if the Mc becomes more interesting in the future ?

1yr

ThefantastictouchLv4

Thank you. You´ve saved my previous time.

ShadowSage:No. MC is actually an idiot with plot armour and unnecessary involvement in other people's business . MC dreams of creating an organization with high power in the game world so he involve with some messy and dangerous people. But he always escaped with dumb luck. Except MC the game elements are top class.

1yr

ThefantastictouchLv4

precious*

Thefantastictouch:Thank you. You´ve saved my previous time.

1yr

gggg4_8ghLv15

he definitely does

Thefantastictouch:I'm currently at chapter 19 and have trouble going on for the same reasons . Please, could you tell me if the Mc becomes more interesting in the future ?

8mth

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