Thefantastictouch

I understand author ́s will to portray a realistic reaction to getting transmigrated. However , if we are really going for this, then with Mc ́s reaction , he should be reported and burnt for witchcraft.

I don’t think so. Playing the game shouldn’t make him competent in combat in the real world.

Why does the Mc want to join the academy though? He could join any other academy; just why the one in which the original Mc will be ?

It makes sense that Mc wants to save that world since he is currently living in it and doesn’t yet know of a way to get back to his original one( though he might not be willing to get back even if he knew of a way; by the look of his thought process until now) . BUT!!! Where is his personal drive? Saving the world is cool but shouldn’t he have a more personal reason on top of not wanting to lose his new world?( e.g : Conquering the world ; being the boss of world class hidden organization; being rich ; building a clan or a family of his own). I believe it’s a personal drive that really makes the difference between a well written Mc and a Mc written just to get the story started.

A bit too generic with a writing style that is not suited for action centered books.

I should have trusted this review 🥲

Just a chap of massive info dump hurg! hope it ́s not the same in the next chapter

Isn’t it a bit too quick for romance ?

I like the duke's attitude so much!

Ten chapters and I can’t read this anymore. It’s just too tedious to go through and the ideas are not so original that I would want to stick . Good points : - The grammar is okay - The reason for the transmigration is stated and not thrown aside - The mc’s goal is stated early enough Bad points : - The pace is slow and the writing style is so plain that it’s hard to care about what happens. - The ideas are not executed in a unique enough way and even the transmigration reason is a bit cliche - The mc doesn't seem to have any personality ( I'm sorry but no. One doesn’t need to read hundreds of chapters to get an mc’s Persona. When a book is really well written , the first two to three chapters are enough to reveal your mc’s personality. ) - For someone who loved his sister so much I think the Mc didn’t try enough to look for ways to be reunited with her( don’t know if it’s still the case in the future chapters though.) - The plot doesn’t seem all that promising May God help you with your next book author.