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Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor2yr
2022-11-12 22:47

Hello readers, Just want to know, if the writing quality has improved or not. Compared to the first 10 or so chapters. How am I doing? Is it improving or not? Also, comment if you want me to re-write the first few chapters. as I get a lot of negative comments from there. English is my second language. So lemme know if there are any grammar mistakes.

Marvel God of Blood

Atrox_H
4.0
338 Chs

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AziroFF
AziroFFLv6

i didn't see any issues with the translation so far

2yr
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AziroFF
AziroFFLv6

but to be fair, english is the second language for me as well and maybe i missed some stuff, but i was able to enjoy the reading, nothing jumped out for me to point out

AziroFF:i didn't see any issues with the translation so far
2yr
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Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Thanks [img=recommend]

AziroFF:but to be fair, english is the second language for me as well and maybe i missed some stuff, but i was able to enjoy the reading, nothing jumped out for me to point out
2yr
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C_Kohn123
C_Kohn123Lv13

I'm a native English speaker and I found the book fantastic ,thank you

2yr
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God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

is there romance?

Atrox_H:Thanks [img=recommend]
2yr
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OshinoAi
OshinoAiLv4

Just asking the same question the guy from above asked, is there a romance?

Atrox_H:Thanks [img=recommend]
2yr
Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Yes, but on the later stage of the novel.

OshinoAi:Just asking the same question the guy from above asked, is there a romance?
2yr
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tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv5

is it harem or just single love interest

Atrox_H:Yes, but on the later stage of the novel.
2yr
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Lore_God
Lore_GodLv13

then plz add the romance tag cauz people like me who don't read novels without romance will miss out ur novel.

Atrox_H:Yes, but on the later stage of the novel.
2yr
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super_star_
super_star_Lv14

yes it well be best if there is romance and also a family of hero

2yr
ggg_alttab
ggg_alttabLv4

o. o o oo.i .o. o oo o o.o o o.o i.i i.i..o.

2yr
Jacob_Hobbs_7913
Jacob_Hobbs_7913Lv4

Korn

2yr
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Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5

who is the Love interest btw

2yr
Infinitesimal
InfinitesimalLv14

Warhammer 40k, god?

2yr
southgamez
southgamezLv15

ngl the chinese racisim is too funny you should have kept it

2yr
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Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Hello guys, sorry for the sudden break. Due to some personal problem I had to take some break for a month. Don't worry, I'll continue to post chapter form next week. As usual 1 chapter per daily. I'm gonna start stockpiling chapters from today so I can post constantly, already have about 10 chapters. See ya

1yr

Kiiiddd
KiiidddLv14

I haven't read the story I just came here to leave the GIF

2yr
_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv12

just came by to drop this gif .

2yr
Theo_Miller
Theo_MillerLv5

The poster did a good of translating the work. The story it self is one of worest fanfic I read in while. The MC has yonug master syndrome and terminal to my enjoyment of the story. I mean a vampire that doesn’t enjoy drinking blood sure it not like your body isn’t change to point it like a drug. I’m MC I’m better then these fonder. Solid translation though good work on that.

2yr
Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Hi readers, new writer(more like poison testing Chinese translations) here. If there's any problem with grammar, lemme know. I'll also try to keep up the updates, atleast 2 chapters a day. See Ya..

2yr
_JuneDays_oz
_JuneDays_ozLv14

The translator is a nationa treasure, and the story is alright. I won’t say it the best because if you have read any Chinese fan fic then you want I’m talking about.

2yr
Puss_slayer_4000
Puss_slayer_4000Lv14

Disappointing.

2yr
RavenClock
RavenClockLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
_Morpheos_
_Morpheos_Lv2

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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