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Why making me remember this? Just when I forgot, this even exists.
What happened to the greyjoy's rebellion? There was no mention of Theon. Or did I just skim through most of em?
I just wanted to ask, is it fully focused on the show or some elements from the books will be included?
So pretty much SHIELD, along with most higher ups knows who he is right? Her kissing him in front of agents is enough to raise suspicions ig.
I know it's normalised in almost all fics. But he should really visit Ancient One, He needs to unlock his full potential, for that he needs to come in contact with magical beings.
Can he please think about these things instead of muttering almost everytime? He lives in a world where a being can hear his fart from the other side of earth. Not saying Superman was keeping his ears on him, but his mutterings getting annoying.
MC introducing his weapons left and right to everyone. Noice!
MC is someone who forgets his own orders. And is kind of a retard, I hope as story progress he'll become better. The whole thing about testing loyalty of Diana and Albert, but not seeing that Diana is a spy for Fury is downright stupid. He has powers, hell his summon Trish has more variety of powers and they both didn't notice Diana sending messages to Fury. Sorry for the long rant. Hope the MCs character becomes better or atleast makes intelligent decisions as story progress. Otherwise it'll be hard to continue with this story, atleast for me. Good luck Author. 🤞
Without chakra he can't do shit. Plus he will later collaborate with Orachimaru, become a ninja.