AziroFF

this is such a good read, there are so many naruto fanfic and most of them happen in konoha, don't get me wrong,most of them are good as well but its refreshing for the story to happen from another pov, the writing quality is good and i feel the pace of the story is great, keep it going.

i didn't expect for this story to be such a good read,shame there's only 20 chapters,really good job with the story

he shouldn't know about devil fruits

i think so too

i think it means"this lord" or something like that from Chinese

this chapter feels like it AI created,forgot to edit it or what?

found it,cheers

can't find it? am i noob? or its's not Pokémon bright adventure?

i tried to read it, i really tried, i can't get over the mistake when the author keep saying ''she instead of he'' or its a mtl, i don't know, shame that the novel looks interesting

no worries mate, take you time, as long as you're happy with your story, good stuff so far and keep it going