Item: Naruto: Marionette of Suna
Rating: 5
Author: TeemVizzle

TeemVizzleAuthor2yr

2022-10-09 22:11

As always, mandatory and shameless authour review. Additional info: - Romance will be slow and non-harem - Takes place in Minato's generation - MC will be modeled on 2 characters in particular. Souei from Tensura and Doflamingo from One piece That's it. Have a good day.

Naruto: Marionette of Suna

TeemVizzle

4.7

45 Chs

Liked by 34 people

Replies14

ArcherArchXLv11

Author I come here because of ur other novel, so I'm having higher expectations than usual with a new novel U better give him the Needle Sword from Kiri tho xD Thx for the hard work

2yr

TeemVizzleAuthor

yikes haha. ill do my best to deliver

ArcherArchX:Author I come here because of ur other novel, so I'm having higher expectations than usual with a new novel U better give him the Needle Sword from Kiri tho xD Thx for the hard work

2yr

_The_Shady_Lv4

i know you will do your best👍

TeemVizzle:yikes haha. ill do my best to deliver

2yr

TheHandOfAuthorLv4

I predicted the future after all..i am the Top G

2yr

Andrey_MLv3

pls 🙏 konan waifu

2yr

God_of_hentaiLv14

is there romance of anykind

TeemVizzle:yikes haha. ill do my best to deliver

1yr

TeemVizzleAuthor

yes, but it'll be slow and not the main focus

God_of_hentai:is there romance of anykind

1yr

BreezyNovelsLv5

Whose the romantic interest?

TeemVizzle:yes, but it'll be slow and not the main focus

1yr

TranshumanistLv14

So marionette's meaning is : a small-scale usually wooden figure (as of a person) with jointed limbs that is moved from above by manipulation of the attached strings or wires, puppet Will the MC be a person trapped in a puppet here? Or a different meaning of puppet as in someone bereft of free will or agency? Or puppet using ninja? Puppet users are called puppeteers or marionettists, or kugutsu users. Was there a writing error on the title of the story ?

1yr

Brent_6064Lv4

so is he an og character from the Naruto world? or transmigrated ?

1yr

TeemVizzleAuthor

OG character

Brent_6064:so is he an og character from the Naruto world? or transmigrated ?

1yr

Fifth_DaoistLv14

Non-harem is based. I'll go read your fic.

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Is this dropped?

TeemVizzle:yikes haha. ill do my best to deliver

7mth

TeemVizzleAuthor

no, i just took a long hiatus. but i'm back and currently working on the next chapter

Romance_guy:Is this dropped?

7mth

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A very nice fic. I haven't seen a lot of non-konoha fics so it's pretty cool. The thread release is also pretty interesting ability and author makes creative uses of it. I love the OC's and other characters. Suna is also somewhat developed and fleshed and i cant wait to see where this goes

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I love this fic! The writing, the plot, the fight scenes, the characters. All are superb. There's great development of characters and I love the character interactions. Minato and Ay being MC's rivals as fellow potential future Kage is incredible and well written. Can't wait for more chapters!

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you wrote canon basically just changed the village and ppl. not interesting at all. boy boy girl team. smiling dumb mc. emo side. loud girl. team test is boring. kid complaining to kage about going on c rank is canon boring... first mission almost die..boring. you didnt make anything new except the thread thing which is just from one piece.

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