The novel is written well. I understand the authors need to make it dark and realistic, but it honestly comes off as the MC constantly getting kicked while he is down. The need to overcome limitless is all swell and good, but there is really not much character development for the MC. A good novel has many ups and downs to keep the reader engaged and from what i have read so far, this is just downs. I applaud you for the quality of your writing, but for as well as this is written it doesn’t make you want to come back for more. Especially once the reader realizes they will have to wait 80 chapters until the MC stops getting wrecked by fate and his artifically poor luck. True, no one wants to see a Gary Stu where everything goes right all the time, but please remember that that opposite Is true as well. It doesnt matter how strong he is if it becomes a drag it read.

As of chapter 14: This will be more of a suggestion and advice than a review, so take from it what you want. I like Yovan. He seems a bit wild, I'd be curious to see how he would end up evolving in a world like One piece. Also, I think I can trust you with making his abilities special and complex like you did with your HxH fanfic. You did phenomenal there, so hopefully, you do the same here because I'm curious how broken abilities can be under Yovan. This is a suggestion, you should build tension and make us readers feel something because you didn't do that with your DC fanfic. It was a different kind of novel, I understand and it was amazing, but I think building tension would be much better. Lastly, good luck and keep up the good work. I will post a full review when there are more chapters or something of significance happens.

Here from your previous novel. I liked it a lot, one of the best I've read, so continue with the good work. Also, this novel seems interesting as well, but I'll post a full review when there are more chapters.

I tried but I can't like the novel, a little too dark for my taste it's not what I expected based on the original work, mainly Mc being suffering directly and when you say it's going to get better from Chapter 80 I look and I'm in 30 it throws me out. I don't understand this system I don't see functionality in it besides a panel and an annual penalty, which I remember one piece normal no longer has a limit if you fight and train you will get strong there is nothing holding you back Zoro does exactly that. I don't speak English to evaluate writing correctly so I'll believe what they said in the comments and say it's good. maybe I'll try to pick up where I left off later but I find it difficult.

I've read a lot of One Piece fanfics and I have to say this is probably my favorite crew. First off, the crew's character growth from strangers to crewmates is pretty well done even though some parts kind of feel like author skipped over a bunch but I find the progression good. I like reading about villains especially in the One Piece world because everyone wants to write about Luffy fanboys. I enjoy the ones about bounty hunters and marines, the ones who mess up Luffy's adventure or just flat out kill him later on. This crew is ...mentally unstable in a good way, it's very entertaining, they're intelligent and unstable, the best combo.

this is just a new novel that the author recently uploaded and I'm super eager to read this too after your other completed novel! please continue making wonderful novels

Alright, here's my honest review. For the people who came here to judge whether they should read this or not, go read it. If you get frustrated or a bit impatient, take a little break. Watch some youtube shorts if you want. Then come back. Cause the story is not a wish fulfillment story (Completely). The mc will struggle. Sometimes a bit too much, but trust me, as the story progresses the story only gets better and better. The mc also gets quite op too. Now, for the people who are a bit frustrated with the story and have decided to drop it and just came here one last time to check if the novel gets more fun. Yeah, it does. It gets really fun and the mc gets really op. Sorry for repeating that. But anyway, keep going. And lastly, for the author, Thanks for this awesome ff. Hopefully it gets more and more dark. Loving it. Thumbs up.

best one piece fan fic ever.I can die now even if i don't see the original one piece ending.The author literally is the g.o.a.t. Man he could even write his own book if he tries hard.I'm so glad and thankful to the past me who was able to read till first 80 chapters because if i dropped it there i would've missed one of the best hidden gem in webnovel.Thank you for writing such a great fiction, author 🫡❤️🔥

Enjoying the story so far the updates are almost daily and the MC is enjoyable so far he hasn't shown us much but the bit he has shown is ok in my books plus I like how the story is structured so far