Author here anyone who wants a good and stable fan fiction that I will be updating every other day download this and give me comment on what I should improve.

I had my reservations about having an OP MC in such a low class world but so far its worked. Maybe him creating legends of himself throughout history makes it more entertaining, hopefully flashbacks of those events play out as well. Choosing any other girl other Alice is wrong but thats an opinion so I can't deduct value for that. Im impressed at the MC's personality, usually those who become Madara are arrogant and boring, him not so much. Maybe being so powerful makes him chill because he doesn't have anything to worry about, whatever it is, I approve. Only real problem is the length of chapters but we can't have everything. I do appreciate how the MC has already melded with the world instead of treating it as fiction as well. Story is definitely worth it to read so far. Still the beginning of the story so take my words with a grain of salt.

Good, but author needs to space out dialogue and normal text better. The large boxes of text are somewhat difficult to read.

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the idea is good but you could have more content like when he is in the war, more character development and how he live a normal life of been a business man.

Madara in..... Twilight?? This won't end well

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