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Shadow_monarch_Ash
Shadow_monarch_AshLv49mth
2024-03-16 09:35

the idea is good but you could have more content like when he is in the war, more character development and how he live a normal life of been a business man.

Twilight: Madara Uchiha

CX_Darthsomali
3.9
19 Chs

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CX_Darthsomali
CX_DarthsomaliAuthor

Author here anyone who wants a good and stable fan fiction that I will be updating every other day download this and give me comment on what I should improve.

2yr

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

I had my reservations about having an OP MC in such a low class world but so far its worked. Maybe him creating legends of himself throughout history makes it more entertaining, hopefully flashbacks of those events play out as well. Choosing any other girl other Alice is wrong but thats an opinion so I can't deduct value for that. Im impressed at the MC's personality, usually those who become Madara are arrogant and boring, him not so much. Maybe being so powerful makes him chill because he doesn't have anything to worry about, whatever it is, I approve. Only real problem is the length of chapters but we can't have everything. I do appreciate how the MC has already melded with the world instead of treating it as fiction as well. Story is definitely worth it to read so far. Still the beginning of the story so take my words with a grain of salt.

1yr
BigBud
BigBudLv4

Good, but author needs to space out dialogue and normal text better. The large boxes of text are somewhat difficult to read.

2yr
Propht
ProphtLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

how can history be so bad it has 4.3 ratings there are people, I don't know what they have in mind. C'est vraiment trop nul, je ne vois pass comment un perso comme Madara marche dans Twilight, et en plus des le premier chapitre ça lance du susano sans aucune raison pff

1yr
yahye_mohamed
yahye_mohamedLv4

so far so good this has some potential [img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
zahra_kianpour
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Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update

1mth
Solomzi_Jiza
Solomzi_JizaLv3

Madara in..... Twilight?? This won't end well

1yr
Kimara_Marshall_7501
Kimara_Marshall_7501Lv2

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