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ProphtLv41yr
2023-10-01 01:03

I plan on continuing and hopefully changing this review. I only got to chapter 3 of the actual story before having to stop right now but sheesh author clearly gave this as much thought the twilight movies had. Story: Starts off really generic and By the time I took this break mc had lived for over 2000 years had passed where the mc apparently did NOTHING and actually degraded because he needs hand signs and screams out jutsu names, keep in mind here he’s ten tails madara with all his experience, abilities and a bit of his personality(not that I have seen anything other then an incompetent chuuni but hey what author says goes). Quality: SOO many mistakes but atleast it was still readable to me. Update: No clue but heard it wasn’t good Character: I have not seen anything from anyone introduced except mc who as I said before seems like an incompetent chuuni but it’s still the beginning so there’s hope World: Hasn’t been touched on yet

Twilight: Madara Uchiha

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CX_Darthsomali
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Author here anyone who wants a good and stable fan fiction that I will be updating every other day download this and give me comment on what I should improve.

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

I had my reservations about having an OP MC in such a low class world but so far its worked. Maybe him creating legends of himself throughout history makes it more entertaining, hopefully flashbacks of those events play out as well. Choosing any other girl other Alice is wrong but thats an opinion so I can't deduct value for that. Im impressed at the MC's personality, usually those who become Madara are arrogant and boring, him not so much. Maybe being so powerful makes him chill because he doesn't have anything to worry about, whatever it is, I approve. Only real problem is the length of chapters but we can't have everything. I do appreciate how the MC has already melded with the world instead of treating it as fiction as well. Story is definitely worth it to read so far. Still the beginning of the story so take my words with a grain of salt.

1yr
BigBud
BigBudLv4

Good, but author needs to space out dialogue and normal text better. The large boxes of text are somewhat difficult to read.

2yr
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

how can history be so bad it has 4.3 ratings there are people, I don't know what they have in mind. C'est vraiment trop nul, je ne vois pass comment un perso comme Madara marche dans Twilight, et en plus des le premier chapitre ça lance du susano sans aucune raison pff

1yr
yahye_mohamed
yahye_mohamedLv4

so far so good this has some potential [img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv3

Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update

1mth
Shadow_monarch_Ash
Shadow_monarch_AshLv4

the idea is good but you could have more content like when he is in the war, more character development and how he live a normal life of been a business man.

9mth
Solomzi_Jiza
Solomzi_JizaLv3

Madara in..... Twilight?? This won't end well

1yr
Kimara_Marshall_7501
Kimara_Marshall_7501Lv2

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