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Bob_Uchiha_XDLv42yr
2023-01-29 05:57

The story has an understandable writing quality; However, there are things that I personally don't like, for example, telling people that they are fictional characters and that their world is an anime or movie created by a fat otaku. The existential crisis and denial does not exist after revealing that the world is a fantasy and is not the 'real world'; literally the protagonist mentions to the female characters that he comes from the 'real world'. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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souryourerAuthor

well only truth can gain true trust

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Well... I understand your point of view, but I don't like it. The protagonist could perhaps first explain the theory of the multiverse (omniverse?), the theory of chaos and the butterfly effect, and finally stop referring to his world as 'the real world'.

souryourer:well only truth can gain true trust
souryourerAuthor

well if I did that then other readers will say that I am giving science lesson rather than novel thank you for suggestion any way

JJGrazyDragon1Lv2

who is the lady in the thumbnail

souryourer:well only truth can gain true trust
souryourerAuthor

in the story ther will tomb rider fantasy world then guess who she is

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Angelina Jolie - Lara Croft - Tomb Raider.

JJGrazyDragon1:who is the lady in the thumbnail
wilson_ramiresLv2

You could have taken the path that the fictional worlds are a lower plane and the "real world" is a higher plane and the problem is over

souryourer:well if I did that then other readers will say that I am giving science lesson rather than novel thank you for suggestion any way
Crimson_KingLv6

Yeah but he doesn’ know if it’s the truth. For all he knows all the worlds are real and the version of anime and manga are just visions of parallel worlds that the Authors experienced. Doesnt mean hes superior to them for believing himself to be from the “real world”

souryourer:well only truth can gain true trust
ANTI_GodLv11

Review this novel Space God

P_PaqLv15

It mentions in the story lol that the characters are programmed or brainwashed to be easier to approach/convince/seduce lol

Luffy_For_The_WinLv4

Honestly, just reading the comment made me want to ask how brandead dumb and psychopathic is the mc? I’m being honest here bc our ‘stories’ don’t encompass the entire world and therefore the instance u technically exist in that world it is a new story and not the original…

souryourer:well only truth can gain true trust
Josh_CorderLv14

I don't understand mentally challenged people if the you who is reading this and is suddenly in a new world right after reading this and start calling the people you see fake and what not that should be a one way ticket to the asylum it makes me sick when I read it it's like what you see is your reality even if it's the matrix and we are just in a dream it wouldn't make it any less then real at the time and anyone who tries to deny it and run around calling people fake and imaginary and what not need to just be locked up in the asylum with Harley Quinn or the joker as they might actually believe you it's like if I read about a story that is a lot like my life am I going to go into work the next day and start calling everyone fake or whatever nope only some deranged person would even if this is all simulation reality is what we make of it as some could say we could all be in a dream and when it wakes we all poof anyway so when I read all this nonsense it's like why do people think it's a good idea to write 50 chapters of some one crying about being reincarnated or something it makes me rant about it is disgusting and unreadable it's the whole point of reincarnated story to want to be reincarnated into said world or why are you writing about it in the first place rant done peace out

IreallylikereadingLv4

you are a D right?

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IreallylikereadingLv4

whats a shuck?

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mantaegeLv3

thanky you saved my time

xErNeSI13xLv1

cogito ergo sum "I think, therefore I am"

Josh_Corder:I don't understand mentally challenged people if the you who is reading this and is suddenly in a new world right after reading this and start calling the people you see fake and what not that should be a one way ticket to the asylum it makes me sick when I read it it's like what you see is your reality even if it's the matrix and we are just in a dream it wouldn't make it any less then real at the time and anyone who tries to deny it and run around calling people fake and imaginary and what not need to just be locked up in the asylum with Harley Quinn or the joker as they might actually believe you it's like if I read about a story that is a lot like my life am I going to go into work the next day and start calling everyone fake or whatever nope only some deranged person would even if this is all simulation reality is what we make of it as some could say we could all be in a dream and when it wakes we all poof anyway so when I read all this nonsense it's like why do people think it's a good idea to write 50 chapters of some one crying about being reincarnated or something it makes me rant about it is disgusting and unreadable it's the whole point of reincarnated story to want to be reincarnated into said world or why are you writing about it in the first place rant done peace out
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