i dont like this narrated writing style there are times it repeats its self it feels like a narrated version of a tv show when it breaks for commercial and come back to a recap i did listen to all the 15 chapter so far and i started it at 7:30 and it just ended at 2:00 so it did keep me wondering what was going happen next but there is the timeline i dont know how long it took for the longest time i didnt even know when it was in the timeline as they said something about harry and the magical world but he ended up being only 6 at this time and should know nothing about it so even though it kept me wondering i am still at a loss to describe what the hell is going on and when

30 chaps so far at the time of this in tags it says system as of yet none and i dont see how one could be introduced and o dont know what to really think about this yet got to wait for more chaps so far its good but nothing has really happened as they just got on the train so only time will tell

i know right i hate this way of story telling that describes how each person feels and explains its like there are so many ways to express something but the way it is said here seems exaggerating and unnecessary like the conversation with moody and headmaster it was to much and didnt even convey what a normal person would say Moody didnt even say how bad it was or all the blood on the wall in the cupboard or anything or that his non actions could cause another dark lord to rise sigh w/e peace out not for me to read this

i think a chapter is missing here he went from dinner with Amelia to a hospital and in a coma

ok finished up to the notice about side chap or something about mc being interviewed by rita but i have to say so much of the story seemed missing like i said when it jumped to the pick of champions mc in previous chaps didnt seem to want to join and said so the after the tour when mc is taking Fleur around then jumps to champions pick and mc is chosen and acted like he wanted and knew he would be chosen he was playing the chelo with sweaty palms waiting like he knew he would be picked the harriot was chosen and they start arguing like un movie and mc just makes suggestions and every ones like ok i like that idea and now there are new schools coming from states and japan ok then next chapter they go to some meating that didnt make any sense to me toi much a mess and the reviews for this are like good book loved it what the hell are you guys smoking to understand this book cuz i need some to understand plz let me know

i dont recommend this as it is it jumps a lot they talk about things like they are important but arnt like at the start they talk about a brain potion like we should already know what it is and should care about it and things related to it then there is jumps in writing and out of place chapters like luna comes and asks mc for help on her project and during said chap Fleur is there fighting with Harriot Potter and in next chapter Fleur and her school just get there and then it jumps to the feast were champions are picked like what the hell is this about so much is skipped at random just dont read until this is fixed dont even get me started with him breaking up with Percy's girlfriend Penelope he was dating and she broke up with him becouse Astoria blackmailed her becouse she was cought snogin Bill Weasley who was at Hogwarts for some reason years after graduation and whatever and then Astoria told him he was cought snogin Fleur when drunk and didnt remember the when they are talking after she comes to school for Triwizard and sees him it seems she didnt even know him and what the fuck Harriot and Fleur are fighting and peeps tell them to stop or go snog each other like what am i reading and thus is halfway out of the current chapters so i will read the rest just to try to figure out what the fuck the story this author is trying to tell here with this crap and maybe get some answers to some of this but will end up with more questions probably sigh dont think i have to worry about spoilers as i dont know whats going on anyway so meh get your shit together author and write a actually storyline or something stop jumping all over the place spent more time developing things then it might've been a good read

exactly

translation garbage i dont know what is going on who is talking to who or what they are talking about as its obscure reference or something that didnt translate well so garbage i dont get why they post it with it as unreadable as it is

the last 3 or so chapters are the same one repeating i just quick scrolled through them so dont know if word for word but pretty much the hospital scene over and over

yeah pretty sure its gnomes as i cant imagine goblins running around some random wizards garden or any wizards garden for that matter unless he has money trees or plants that produces gold and its the only place they grow unless they like this plant

get a discord and don't use chapters as a reddit post one if you use the audio version it will mess with it and it will make it stop to load it or it will cause the app to crash and when reading it will make loading the next chap take longer to load as i think they use a system that the next chap loads while reading a chapter if anything make a announcement chap or something not sure how people do it but they have a few chaps before the first one that they use for stuff like this just date the messages or something as it makes no sense to add polls or announcements in chapters as months or years later they are outdated and are meaningless and a discord would let you chat live and get ideas for whatever

what makes you so confident great red can't he is the dragon of dreams right so i would think it should be possible same with ophis being infinite dragon but meh she doesn't seem to care about anything other then getting her quiet back but meh just my thoughts on it so meh and a year or more old post so doesn't matter just posting my thoughts anyway

lol of course they need to share it's been what over 50 years since there last time....and why does this Grindelwald seem like a bottom and not a top I always thought Dumbledore was the bottom but it seems I was wrong

lol you sure it's not in the closet

hiding behind the closet

i read in a fanfic that it was because of the fumes of the potions and since he cared very little about what other's thought he didn't take care of it as it would be really annoying to do a lengthy treatment every day but a specific potion to not get fumes in would make sense too and the down side is a Greasy look

I know right I didn't think about it till this chapter and now I can't not think about it now I wonder what v did when he was in her body that made her reaction in the movie so exagegerated something seemed like it was off but now I don't know right now one ever noticed re watch and you might notice something lol dang it protect Ginny she keeps getting her body messed with by older boys

free 5 ⭐ just for the description I will add this to my watching list and will read when there are enough chapters i usually only listen to the audio version on my phone while at work as i don't like trying to remember what was going on when reading the next chapter i listen to too many to keep track of but just the description caught my attention and i don't usually like dark themes so will give it a try later

starting a protect Ginny campaign to protect he from the mc

lies if he had no interest he would have just said nope who knows what this guy is doing to Ginny's body while he in control for long periods of time like he would obviously have to use the restroom at some point ...