reason i like 1. a story about Mahabharat2. a story about Karan 3. a story of many legendary figures .4. changing the story5. changing the fate of many unfortunate peoples .6. I'm bored 😒7. i liked when MC misunderstood something and do over the top things. it gives the feeling of "The Eminence in Shadow" ** what i hate**1.. changing the history but since its a fanfic i don't care even if it make me uncomfortable .but it cost money so it's not a fanfic 2. if you are writing it in English then why bother with so many Hindi and Sanskrit words . just use father , mother instead of pitashree .. ( use Hindi words in moderation that actually means something .3 . I like story and side story also some details but ... you have straching it too much . explaining simple things twice and thrice too much .4 . story pace is to slow and chapters are small .a single chapter is worthless for a single scenario you are using multiple chapters 5. paid chapter start too early and these small chapters cost 2 fp. it forces you to go pirate . 6. there are too many legendary figures and too many epic storyline so why bother with harem nonsense .7 . you streched the fact about his troublesome harem life , harem fight , jealousy , raising the flags or what not . why.... ????he is in ancient times where harem is common for a king so why trouble us with useless things .you could add some fun and little drama in chapters but no .. you are wasting tons of chapter for his harem that is not even started yet. why... in ancient times more than 5000 years ago, and this reincarnated guy can't handle harem of little girls . why...?Google says krishna has more than 16107 wife .8. why on the earth a Star child blood line bans Harem,.. for what reason . it shouldn't even mention harem in first place . you could just say that his soul is from kalyug so it encourages or discourage the harem , why blood line .....? 9. some time author looks more biased than Bisham
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