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2023-06-04 12:56

I think that Mc should try to aim for the reform of society and create a kingdom as per the rules of the vedas that is based on the duties executed by a person their caste will be decided you can take reference of this type of kingdom building from another set of fictional Indian novel by AMISH the immortals of meluha in which the kingdom of meluha had laws which were based on the old vedas. I always felt that it was a shame that Karna didn't do anything for people who faced similar situation like him and we're exploited and made fun of . And since most of the kingdoms wouldn't want this the entire world will become his enemy and scheme against him. Fitting for the overpowered Mc.

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bro is trying to make evil look good . I think you should have done more research. your novel is all about praising karna and degrading Krishna and pandava,you have to know that yudhisthira never become the king of hastinapur , arjuna created a kingdom called indrapasth for his elder brother even in mahabharata yuddha they wanted was indrapastha not hastinapur , in ch 47 you cursed kunti for the death of 6 people but not said anything about kaurava who had put the fire on lakshgrih you got effect of kali on your mind. let me tell youduryodhana was incarnation of kali , karna was reincarnation of a demon who was killed by Nar -Narayana (arjuna krishna) he had the boon of 10,000 armor and out of them 9,999 was destroyed by nar(arjun) karna was reincarnated with remaining one armor. It's OK if you are fan of karna I also like his kindness but you literally had made him god like , many say karna is surya putra so he is prince of celestial bodies but as indra putra arjuna is prince of deva, he even rejected the chance to be in swarga lok for his elder brother , if arjun or pandava knew karna was his elder brother they would never go against him. karna was killed for his sin of participation in abhimanyu death . Arjuna had pashupatatra that can easily destroy earth and you think he can't destroy an armor. (It was my opinion your novel your wish , but I can't see people choosing good over evil, you are fan of karna, I am fan of arjuna you had your frustration I got my frustration after reading your fan fiction , if my word hurted you then I am sorry but all I had spoken is fact you can't deny it karna was paying for his karm of previous life and was earning the karma in dwapar yug arjun also got punished for every mistake he did and he accepted it not denied like other )

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