It's a good story that uses a lot of resources from the universe itself of course with a little creativity, ranging from improvement rituals that honestly is the coolest part for me, using a little logic since it's obvious that the first men were practitioners of magic at some point, the few things I don't like one of them is the author always making up an excuse for Ned and Caitlin's mistakes, I'm not saying that being blunt all the time the story like that would be too boring, but we have to put the blame on each in its proper place, it is not always the fault of certain factors, although in this fanfic the author even managed to close well in some points about his actions, but an extremely irritating thing is that the author does not make the culprits nor work for their forgiveness, there's also this thing about not sacrificing people for your self-improvement that I find annoying it's not like there's a lack of rapists and murderers in the world, one thing I don't like is also this annoying lack and the MC, it makes him act like a Harry Potter of life which is like I said very annoying, other than that it's an excellent story having almost everything to be one of the best GOT stories, one last thing the chapter updates are kinda slow which ends up discouraging to follow the story.
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Thanks for the review. The story is still in Aegon's early years, and yes, he really is a sort of Harry Potter right now. The only difference is... Aegon learns and adapts. Hope you enjoy the development I have planned for him! :D
