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DonMegalo
DonMegaloLv42yr
2022-10-01 22:06

One of the major selling point of this fic is the above average grammar. Not perfect, but well beyond the standard of WN. Especially GoT/ASOIAF Fic. I can't say about the update consistency for now, but from what the author note, he set a 3-5 chapter a week, consist of 15k words. The plot is not rushed, and the MC is not a Gary Stu so far. Action have consequences, and there's always something you can't control in life. The MC have something to strive for, and he will do anything in his power to achieve it or die trying. Or, making someone else die in his stead. Author have to be careful to juggle the convoluted plot that even Martin struggle for. Only advice is don't put too much stuff on the table all at the same time.

Aegon The Dragon King - GoT/ASOIAF SI

TigerOfTheWest
4.8
27 Chs

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TigerOfTheWest
TigerOfTheWestAuthor

Thanks for the review and the paragraph comments as well! English is my third language, so I might miss something sometimes. It really helps when some of my grammatical mistakes and typos are pointed out. Hope you'll enjoy the future chapters, and that I can manage to juggle the immense plot :)

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DaoistH7599X
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The SI is a pathetic hypocrite with divine idiocy and naivety as a basis for his being. All these fake 'care' and stupid wake up call is also annoying, it ruins it all.

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DrAk_VaNgUaRd
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Great beginning. Can't wait to read more. Language and grammar is good. Reading will not give you headache. Love the character design. Author keep up the good work

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ViaSky
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Dragon go... ROARRRR! [img=recommend]

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dampsterHam
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So far so good. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Shadow_1245
Shadow_1245Lv4

Only problem is it doesn't matter how much I let it stack before reading it always ends with me asking for more keep writing author as the only few mature authors on this platform love your book.

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DaoistRGOoG6
DaoistRGOoG6Lv4

So very very good keep going.

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Bobuzamaki
BobuzamakiLv14

it is really good. one of the best one si got/asoiaf story I have read

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Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

Did you drop?????????????????????? Please tell me you didn't.

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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

Pretty average GOT fanfic. Makes the same mistakes every other GOT fanfic does. Has the same premise as every other GOT fanfi. (Make an MC Jon snow, spend 20+ chapters on his childhood, give him special beast companions) you know the drill. It’s in no way a bad novel, I just feel its not special either. I’m hoping that by the time the MC reaches adulthood, the author lets the novel take off, because hes hinted at some plot points through (pov changes) but we haven’t really seen much of anything.

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