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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv132yr
2022-10-14 11:52

Pretty average GOT fanfic. Makes the same mistakes every other GOT fanfic does. Has the same premise as every other GOT fanfi. (Make an MC Jon snow, spend 20+ chapters on his childhood, give him special beast companions) you know the drill. It’s in no way a bad novel, I just feel its not special either. I’m hoping that by the time the MC reaches adulthood, the author lets the novel take off, because hes hinted at some plot points through (pov changes) but we haven’t really seen much of anything.

Aegon The Dragon King - GoT/ASOIAF SI

TigerOfTheWest
4.8
27 Chs

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TigerOfTheWest
TigerOfTheWestAuthor

I've written 35k words and the story is going to be 300k+. It has barely started.

2yr
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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

Then I look forward to the rest 👍🏾 hope your suprise me

TigerOfTheWest:I've written 35k words and the story is going to be 300k+. It has barely started.
2yr
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DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv4

The SI is a pathetic hypocrite with divine idiocy and naivety as a basis for his being. All these fake 'care' and stupid wake up call is also annoying, it ruins it all.

2yr

DrAk_VaNgUaRd
DrAk_VaNgUaRdLv5

Great beginning. Can't wait to read more. Language and grammar is good. Reading will not give you headache. Love the character design. Author keep up the good work

2yr
DonMegalo
DonMegaloLv4

One of the major selling point of this fic is the above average grammar. Not perfect, but well beyond the standard of WN. Especially GoT/ASOIAF Fic. I can't say about the update consistency for now, but from what the author note, he set a 3-5 chapter a week, consist of 15k words. The plot is not rushed, and the MC is not a Gary Stu so far. Action have consequences, and there's always something you can't control in life. The MC have something to strive for, and he will do anything in his power to achieve it or die trying. Or, making someone else die in his stead. Author have to be careful to juggle the convoluted plot that even Martin struggle for. Only advice is don't put too much stuff on the table all at the same time.

2yr
ViaSky
ViaSkyLv10

Dragon go... ROARRRR! [img=recommend]

2yr
dampsterHam
dampsterHamLv11

So far so good. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Shadow_1245
Shadow_1245Lv4

Only problem is it doesn't matter how much I let it stack before reading it always ends with me asking for more keep writing author as the only few mature authors on this platform love your book.

2yr
DaoistRGOoG6
DaoistRGOoG6Lv4

So very very good keep going.

2yr
Bobuzamaki
BobuzamakiLv14

it is really good. one of the best one si got/asoiaf story I have read

2yr
Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

Did you drop?????????????????????? Please tell me you didn't.

1yr
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