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DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv42yr
2022-10-04 16:40

The SI is a pathetic hypocrite with divine idiocy and naivety as a basis for his being. All these fake 'care' and stupid wake up call is also annoying, it ruins it all.

Aegon The Dragon King - GoT/ASOIAF SI

TigerOfTheWest
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27 Chs

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TigerOfTheWest
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The SI is currently a 7-yo traumatized child, who is still trying to come to terms with what has happened in his life. He has memories of a life, his child brain has issues with fully understanding, and he is still growing. If you expect him to be the perfect MC within 20k words of a story that will probably be 500k+, then you will be sorely disappointed. He was not particularly succesful in his time on earth, so expecting him to be so within 7 years of growing up scorned in a castle, in a world his memories tell him is fictional, is honestly weird to me. This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons, growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story. I don't mind the opinion though, since it shows people that they shouldn't read the story if they want someone perfect from the get-go. Thanks for the review!

2yr
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Immortal_Panda
Immortal_PandaLv14

Harem?

TigerOfTheWest:The SI is currently a 7-yo traumatized child, who is still trying to come to terms with what has happened in his life. He has memories of a life, his child brain has issues with fully understanding, and he is still growing. If you expect him to be the perfect MC within 20k words of a story that will probably be 500k+, then you will be sorely disappointed. He was not particularly succesful in his time on earth, so expecting him to be so within 7 years of growing up scorned in a castle, in a world his memories tell him is fictional, is honestly weird to me. This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons, growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story. I don't mind the opinion though, since it shows people that they shouldn't read the story if they want someone perfect from the get-go. Thanks for the review!
2yr
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mow
mowLv4

What's the MC's personality like? In your info aux you basically say he has to keep a morale high ground so does that also involve not stepping on another lord for his gains?

TigerOfTheWest:The SI is currently a 7-yo traumatized child, who is still trying to come to terms with what has happened in his life. He has memories of a life, his child brain has issues with fully understanding, and he is still growing. If you expect him to be the perfect MC within 20k words of a story that will probably be 500k+, then you will be sorely disappointed. He was not particularly succesful in his time on earth, so expecting him to be so within 7 years of growing up scorned in a castle, in a world his memories tell him is fictional, is honestly weird to me. This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons, growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story. I don't mind the opinion though, since it shows people that they shouldn't read the story if they want someone perfect from the get-go. Thanks for the review!
2yr
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TigerOfTheWest
TigerOfTheWestAuthor

Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I

mow:What's the MC's personality like? In your info aux you basically say he has to keep a morale high ground so does that also involve not stepping on another lord for his gains?
2yr
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mow
mowLv4

I know i know, was just using it as an example.

TigerOfTheWest:Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I
2yr
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ProcurandOuro
ProcurandOuroLv3

Meh

TigerOfTheWest:Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I
2yr
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mow
mowLv4

Exactly my reaction

ProcurandOuro:Meh
2yr
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HeepyterV17
HeepyterV17Lv3

Touche...

2yr
Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

world trade only works when others aren't trying to murder you and gain your property

TigerOfTheWest:Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I
2yr
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DrAk_VaNgUaRd
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Great beginning. Can't wait to read more. Language and grammar is good. Reading will not give you headache. Love the character design. Author keep up the good work

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DonMegalo
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One of the major selling point of this fic is the above average grammar. Not perfect, but well beyond the standard of WN. Especially GoT/ASOIAF Fic. I can't say about the update consistency for now, but from what the author note, he set a 3-5 chapter a week, consist of 15k words. The plot is not rushed, and the MC is not a Gary Stu so far. Action have consequences, and there's always something you can't control in life. The MC have something to strive for, and he will do anything in his power to achieve it or die trying. Or, making someone else die in his stead. Author have to be careful to juggle the convoluted plot that even Martin struggle for. Only advice is don't put too much stuff on the table all at the same time.

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Only problem is it doesn't matter how much I let it stack before reading it always ends with me asking for more keep writing author as the only few mature authors on this platform love your book.

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So very very good keep going.

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it is really good. one of the best one si got/asoiaf story I have read

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Did you drop?????????????????????? Please tell me you didn't.

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TreacherousVoid
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Pretty average GOT fanfic. Makes the same mistakes every other GOT fanfic does. Has the same premise as every other GOT fanfi. (Make an MC Jon snow, spend 20+ chapters on his childhood, give him special beast companions) you know the drill. It’s in no way a bad novel, I just feel its not special either. I’m hoping that by the time the MC reaches adulthood, the author lets the novel take off, because hes hinted at some plot points through (pov changes) but we haven’t really seen much of anything.

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