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DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv42yr
2022-10-04 16:40

The SI is a pathetic hypocrite with divine idiocy and naivety as a basis for his being. All these fake 'care' and stupid wake up call is also annoying, it ruins it all.

Aegon The Dragon King - GoT/ASOIAF SI

TigerOfTheWest
4.8
27 Chs

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TigerOfTheWest
TigerOfTheWestAuthor

The SI is currently a 7-yo traumatized child, who is still trying to come to terms with what has happened in his life. He has memories of a life, his child brain has issues with fully understanding, and he is still growing. If you expect him to be the perfect MC within 20k words of a story that will probably be 500k+, then you will be sorely disappointed. He was not particularly succesful in his time on earth, so expecting him to be so within 7 years of growing up scorned in a castle, in a world his memories tell him is fictional, is honestly weird to me. This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons, growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story. I don't mind the opinion though, since it shows people that they shouldn't read the story if they want someone perfect from the get-go. Thanks for the review!

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Immortal_Panda
Immortal_PandaLv14

Harem?

TigerOfTheWest:The SI is currently a 7-yo traumatized child, who is still trying to come to terms with what has happened in his life. He has memories of a life, his child brain has issues with fully understanding, and he is still growing. If you expect him to be the perfect MC within 20k words of a story that will probably be 500k+, then you will be sorely disappointed. He was not particularly succesful in his time on earth, so expecting him to be so within 7 years of growing up scorned in a castle, in a world his memories tell him is fictional, is honestly weird to me. This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons, growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story. I don't mind the opinion though, since it shows people that they shouldn't read the story if they want someone perfect from the get-go. Thanks for the review!
2yr
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mow
mowLv4

What's the MC's personality like? In your info aux you basically say he has to keep a morale high ground so does that also involve not stepping on another lord for his gains?

TigerOfTheWest:The SI is currently a 7-yo traumatized child, who is still trying to come to terms with what has happened in his life. He has memories of a life, his child brain has issues with fully understanding, and he is still growing. If you expect him to be the perfect MC within 20k words of a story that will probably be 500k+, then you will be sorely disappointed. He was not particularly succesful in his time on earth, so expecting him to be so within 7 years of growing up scorned in a castle, in a world his memories tell him is fictional, is honestly weird to me. This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons, growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story. I don't mind the opinion though, since it shows people that they shouldn't read the story if they want someone perfect from the get-go. Thanks for the review!
2yr
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TigerOfTheWest
TigerOfTheWestAuthor

Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I

mow:What's the MC's personality like? In your info aux you basically say he has to keep a morale high ground so does that also involve not stepping on another lord for his gains?
2yr
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mow
mowLv4

I know i know, was just using it as an example.

TigerOfTheWest:Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I
2yr
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ProcurandOuro
ProcurandOuroLv3

Meh

TigerOfTheWest:Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I
2yr
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mow
mowLv4

Exactly my reaction

ProcurandOuro:Meh
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HeepyterV17
HeepyterV17Lv3

Touche...

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Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

world trade only works when others aren't trying to murder you and gain your property

TigerOfTheWest:Another point is: Why does he have to step on another to gain? World trade has shown that we gain much more when we cooperate. If it doesn't always seem so, then it's the fault of the ruling class, not trade. I
2yr
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