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idle_enthusiastLv142yr
2022-11-05 02:44

Translation is good but, the author were trash. i read until like 46 chapter and there no meaningful plot development, the character was one of generic cultivation novel called cardbox. there nothing hinting his own conflict or what ever, just like watching gameplay pf open world in youtube, no matter what power up or fight he get it make me sleepier the more i read it. i hope it getting better but currently i feel like i can just skip 10 chapter and still can ignore the devlopment happen in there.

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