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please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv41yr
2023-02-28 16:44

I might be a little harsh here but even though the story is written quite good compared to many ff on webnovel it's hella boring with a boring mc boring interactions boring plot and seems like a waste of time to me.

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maelvoid_2025
maelvoid_2025Lv4

After reading 100 some chapters it repeats again and again with nothing actually happening plot wise.

shrinemaiden
shrinemaidenLv2

500 chapters are like that MC has no personality, characters reactions are bland and he gets everything with the system and it's boring af

maelvoid_2025:After reading 100 some chapters it repeats again and again with nothing actually happening plot wise.
JoyousRebellion
JoyousRebellionLv1

like many bad chin ese novels then. good, I won't read this.

maelvoid_2025:After reading 100 some chapters it repeats again and again with nothing actually happening plot wise.
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

It was hella bumby at the start, I even found myself skipping chapters at the black corner region arc. Though, after that, it got better, and I found myself enjoying this fanfic until the latest chapter.

CrazeR
CrazeRLv13

is it good ?

DaoistObvious:It was hella bumby at the start, I even found myself skipping chapters at the black corner region arc. Though, after that, it got better, and I found myself enjoying this fanfic until the latest chapter.
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

yup, it is. Just that the Black Corner Region took too much time. But overall, one of the best btth fanfics I've read.

CrazeR:is it good ?
BlueApple4U
BlueApple4ULv4

Bruh same, the start of the story was hard to tolerate then like at chapter 150-200 it’s starts to become enjoyable when he actually has the power of a duo king.

DaoistObvious:It was hella bumby at the start, I even found myself skipping chapters at the black corner region arc. Though, after that, it got better, and I found myself enjoying this fanfic until the latest chapter.
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Kisshot
KisshotAuthor

I will be mentioning some important points that might help you decide whether or not to read this story. SPOILERS WARNING FOR FUTURE EVENTS! (Not explicit) ..... .... ... . Summarized: 1) The MC is calm and tolerant, not like most Chinese MCs, but has a bottom line. 2) The MC will not seek to antagonize Xiao Yan actively, his attitude will be indifferent. 3) The MC will not follow the same path as Xiao Yan. 4) The story is slow-paced at the beginning. 5) There will be some OC's, especially in the first major arc. 6) The time will come when the MC will actively influence the original story. 7) The love interests are very relevant to the story, in the future very powerful, and will be of great help to the MC. (If you want spoilers of who they are check the comment in chapter 2 where I answer that). 8) The Life Simulator System will simulate a maximum of 10 years ahead. Long version: 1) The Protagonist: The MC unlike most Chinese MC's, usually thinks things through calmly and will not jump at the slightest provocation, he has quite a bit of tolerance, but also will not hesitate with those who have crossed the line. He's not perfect, but you definitely won't think he has a hole in his head. This story is not based on walking the same path as Xiao Yan and stealing his chances, this is the story of Xiao Ming (MC of this story) and he is going to walk his own path, so some OCs might appear especially in the first major arc, of course then during his adventures he will influence the original story more and more. The MC will not actively antagonize the original protagonist (Xiao Yan) of the story, whether they become enemies in the future will depend on Xiao Yan's actions. 2) Pace of the story The MC has good talent and a quite useful system, however, the development especially in the first 50 chapters will be slow-paced, as the MC needs to practice his techniques, learn alchemy and go out to look for his own opportunities that will be the basis that will make him very powerful in the near future. After all that, despite being considered a powerhouse, he won't ruin the story with an invincible MC, his power level will be consistent and his adventures interesting. So if you are looking for an OP MC from the start this is not your thing. 3)Love interests Love interests will be very relevant to the future story, the MC will not actively seek a relationship, it will happen based on circumstances, however, the main emphasis of the story is on the adventure, so take love interests as travel companions and a great help for the MC.

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