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Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv42yr
2023-01-10 06:14

'As of Ch.185' Evaluation: Sparkling Gem! WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. 5/5 CD: MC is not that OP as he also uses his foreknowledge of BTTH to his advantage rather then 'hugging-thigh' of Xiao San, plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of BTTH-verse. 5/5 US: Author-san kept the pacing of his update up to speed which stimulates readers to keep it on our toes. 5/5. WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed the big plots that is in the BTTH cannon as well as the world of the Big Clans. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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Reign_Bloodark
Reign_BloodarkLv5

wasnt the mc of btth xiao yan tho

Fengzi
FengziLv4

xiao san is a nickname

Reign_Bloodark:wasnt the mc of btth xiao yan tho
Rohan_Khan_4418
Rohan_Khan_4418Lv4

How many members are in harem

M_Zero09
M_Zero09Lv14

Only 3 girls for now (1 confirmed, 2 on the way). All of them are MC's travel companions.

Rohan_Khan_4418:How many members are in harem
s_b8099
s_b8099Lv4

1 is a well developed romance , 1 seems finda forced and hinestly seems like a deal ( medusa) , 2 future members are confirmed

Rohan_Khan_4418:How many members are in harem
Draco_9102005
Draco_9102005Lv4

who are they?

s_b8099: 1 is a well developed romance , 1 seems finda forced and hinestly seems like a deal ( medusa) , 2 future members are confirmed
s_b8099
s_b8099Lv4

xiao yi xian , medusa , zi yan and qing lin respectively.

Draco_9102005:who are they?
Rohan_Khan_4418
Rohan_Khan_4418Lv4

Thanks

Draco_9102005:who are they?
Draco_9102005
Draco_9102005Lv4

which chap are u reading

s_b8099:xiao yi xian , medusa , zi yan and qing lin respectively.
s_b8099
s_b8099Lv4

I am caught up with the latest chapter

Draco_9102005:which chap are u reading
Draco_9102005
Draco_9102005Lv4

Thanks bro

s_b8099:I am caught up with the latest chapter
The_Tzar
The_TzarLv14

I feel that the use of the phrase, "less to no..." when concerning grammar is a little, disconcerting?

blalala_zzz
blalala_zzzLv15

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Betek
BetekLv4

I am in chapter 440 Four confirmed one developing

Rohan_Khan_4418:How many members are in harem
Broken_Dude_789
Broken_Dude_789Lv3

name?

Betek:I am in chapter 440 Four confirmed one developing
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Kisshot
KisshotAuthor

I will be mentioning some important points that might help you decide whether or not to read this story. SPOILERS WARNING FOR FUTURE EVENTS! (Not explicit) ..... .... ... . Summarized: 1) The MC is calm and tolerant, not like most Chinese MCs, but has a bottom line. 2) The MC will not seek to antagonize Xiao Yan actively, his attitude will be indifferent. 3) The MC will not follow the same path as Xiao Yan. 4) The story is slow-paced at the beginning. 5) There will be some OC's, especially in the first major arc. 6) The time will come when the MC will actively influence the original story. 7) The love interests are very relevant to the story, in the future very powerful, and will be of great help to the MC. (If you want spoilers of who they are check the comment in chapter 2 where I answer that). 8) The Life Simulator System will simulate a maximum of 10 years ahead. Long version: 1) The Protagonist: The MC unlike most Chinese MC's, usually thinks things through calmly and will not jump at the slightest provocation, he has quite a bit of tolerance, but also will not hesitate with those who have crossed the line. He's not perfect, but you definitely won't think he has a hole in his head. This story is not based on walking the same path as Xiao Yan and stealing his chances, this is the story of Xiao Ming (MC of this story) and he is going to walk his own path, so some OCs might appear especially in the first major arc, of course then during his adventures he will influence the original story more and more. The MC will not actively antagonize the original protagonist (Xiao Yan) of the story, whether they become enemies in the future will depend on Xiao Yan's actions. 2) Pace of the story The MC has good talent and a quite useful system, however, the development especially in the first 50 chapters will be slow-paced, as the MC needs to practice his techniques, learn alchemy and go out to look for his own opportunities that will be the basis that will make him very powerful in the near future. After all that, despite being considered a powerhouse, he won't ruin the story with an invincible MC, his power level will be consistent and his adventures interesting. So if you are looking for an OP MC from the start this is not your thing. 3)Love interests Love interests will be very relevant to the future story, the MC will not actively seek a relationship, it will happen based on circumstances, however, the main emphasis of the story is on the adventure, so take love interests as travel companions and a great help for the MC.

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