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Kirito_Kirigaya_3995
Kirito_Kirigaya_3995Lv42yr
2023-03-24 15:11

I have just finished reading this novel and I am confident to say that this is one of the best novels I have read. The story plot and development are amazing and the world background is explained in a good way making the us read it without being confused and giving us a understanding of the plot and the story . But the only drawback is that are some mistakes in the grammar and some time some words are repeating or some letters are not there in the words but if we overlook that then this novel is fantastic 馃槏馃槏馃槏... I hope the author fixes this problem and thank you for your hard work in providing us this wonderful novel. All the best and I am looking forward to new and exciting chapters released in the future 馃槉馃槉馃槉 All Hail "The Monarch of Heaven's Fortune" " Jun Tianyun"

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The_Crying_Man
The_Crying_ManLv12

nah

tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv5

does he really go to different words or something different

sholo_bolo
sholo_boloLv4

"if we overlook the flaws, then it's one of the best novels" this review is pretty much saying this. And thank you for stating the obvious that if you ignore the negatives, only positive things are left

Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Which chapters in this novel has lemons in it?

tony_stark_3000:does he really go to different words or something different
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Which chapters in this novel has lemons in it?

sholo_bolo:"if we overlook the flaws, then it's one of the best novels" this review is pretty much saying this. And thank you for stating the obvious that if you ignore the negatives, only positive things are left
sholo_bolo
sholo_boloLv4

bro i forgor

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Which chapters in this novel has lemons in it?
RAJAN18
RAJAN18Lv3

sholo_bolo:"if we overlook the flaws, then it's one of the best novels" this review is pretty much saying this. And thank you for stating the obvious that if you ignore the negatives, only positive things are left
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Blue_Robin
Blue_RobinLv14

Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable. The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl. Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't. Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps. All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid. 3/5 Keep it up lad!

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