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please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv42yr
2023-04-10 23:05

I never gave an NTR novel more than one star but your first 2 arcs of the novel got me hooked before the third arc ruined it for me so 2 stars are the highest I can give an NTR novel and I don't mind you writing an NTR novel but plz set a tag beforehand.

Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

starry8sword
3.9
550 Chs

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starry8sword
starry8swordAuthor

Hope you read the 4th arc. I hope you will like it :)

2yr
please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

sorry, NTR is not my thing anyway good luck with your novel,

starry8sword:Hope you read the 4th arc. I hope you will like it :)
2yr
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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Any hope to change that ntr scene?

starry8sword:Hope you read the 4th arc. I hope you will like it :)
2yr
starry8sword
starry8swordAuthor

It's not really a NTR...I have tweaked the chapter a bit so...it's all just an illusion

Daoist_Culture:Any hope to change that ntr scene?
2yr
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I_don_t_know
I_don_t_knowLv4

But 4 th arc is better i aliked it from there

1yr
Vatsal_Sharma_6258
Vatsal_Sharma_6258Lv14

What NTR are you talking about? ??

1yr
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

Even if it's an illusion I have no idea why would you add NTR when you know 99% of people loath it and will spam you with 1 star reviews. Also that's coming from someone who still hasn't started the novel and only from what I see in reviews.

starry8sword:It's not really a NTR...I have tweaked the chapter a bit so...it's all just an illusion
1yr
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mulaabana
mulaabanaLv2

he might have rewrote the chapter.

Vatsal_Sharma_6258:What NTR are you talking about? ??
1yr
CarWorlds
CarWorldsLv1

I didn't expect Mighty Sir doaist to be okay with change of scene. I didn't even like author if they write Ntr scene. I don't read author's other novel even it doesn't have ntr, straightaway blacklist of author.Btw did you read this novel?

Daoist_Culture:Any hope to change that ntr scene?
1yr
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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Well, for some authors scenes like that are ok cos " mc did not care about that woman anyway" where everyone that reads harems hate it to the bone. Right now that scene did not happen and all of it was just an illusion - thats enough for me. Thats scene dont really need to be there cos it hurt the novel very much, but hey, at least its an illusion. And to reply to your question, I still have it in my library and need to read it. There is not a lot of complains if you dont count that scene.

CarWorlds:I didn't expect Mighty Sir doaist to be okay with change of scene. I didn't even like author if they write Ntr scene. I don't read author's other novel even it doesn't have ntr, straightaway blacklist of author.Btw did you read this novel?
1yr
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HegemonDao
HegemonDaoLv11

So that NTR scene is not there now? But just an illusion. At least that is better than nothing. I read this sometime ago and I couldn't read until it reached the NTR scenes, If i had read I would probably never even come to see the reviews again. But it is unfortunate that this good novel went downhill with that. And Now I am hesitating to read your other novel, Infinite systems... Will it has NTR too? You have already given the green light for Yuri. *Sigh* Yuri is a little bit fine if they do that when they are with MC, but who guarantees that the harem wouldn't do that when MC is away...

starry8sword:It's not really a NTR...I have tweaked the chapter a bit so...it's all just an illusion
1yr
2
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

What xd? Other books have yuri?

HegemonDao:So that NTR scene is not there now? But just an illusion. At least that is better than nothing. I read this sometime ago and I couldn't read until it reached the NTR scenes, If i had read I would probably never even come to see the reviews again. But it is unfortunate that this good novel went downhill with that. And Now I am hesitating to read your other novel, Infinite systems... Will it has NTR too? You have already given the green light for Yuri. *Sigh* Yuri is a little bit fine if they do that when they are with MC, but who guarantees that the harem wouldn't do that when MC is away...
1yr
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there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------

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