I have just finished reading this novel and I am confident to say that this is one of the best novels I have read. The story plot and development are amazing and the world background is explained in a good way making the us read it without being confused and giving us a understanding of the plot and the story . But the only drawback is that are some mistakes in the grammar and some time some words are repeating or some letters are not there in the words but if we overlook that then this novel is fantastic 😍😍😍... I hope the author fixes this problem and thank you for your hard work in providing us this wonderful novel. All the best and I am looking forward to new and exciting chapters released in the future 😊😊😊 All Hail "The Monarch of Heaven's Fortune" " Jun Tianyun"

I really liked the novel, atleast until the newest chapter where there is ntr, normally I would give this 5 stars but the ntr ruined everything

WARNING! NTR! THIS STORY CONTAINS NTR,MIGHT POSSIBLY CONTAIN WORSE STUFF SINCE THE AUTHOR IS WILLING TO PUT NTR IN IT.

Tis was good... if only Author/MC wasn't much of a cuck, imagine needing an answer as to why he out it up and him replying that it was only a little bit. NTR is NTR. End of discussion. Such a shame

Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable. The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl. Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't. Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps. All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid. 3/5 Keep it up lad!

Ntr trash............................. ................................ ........... ....................................................

I never gave an NTR novel more than one star but your first 2 arcs of the novel got me hooked before the third arc ruined it for me so 2 stars are the highest I can give an NTR novel and I don't mind you writing an NTR novel but plz set a tag beforehand.

virgin make an harem +ntr

there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------

Sigh, this is definitely a chinese novel, one in which if you turn off your logic, you will enjoy. Ungrateful mc The system isn't really explained properly. Sentinel System, who is kinda tsundere... the personality of mc changes quite a lot.