Hello author for a short and simple opinion of your fanfiction according to me I can say that it is enough just to read its thoughts / interior monologue to understand for once the work put in it, I don't understand people who don't like the personality of the MC because for me I finally see a realistic MC and a breath of fresh air in my reading for example his personality 50% wise 50% angry so please continue ;) (spelling quality: 10/10 ) Google Translate
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