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BASTILLE
BASTILLELv132yr
2022-09-19 06:43

All people who seek real writing should read this, author doesn’t rush things like most ff’s out there who speed run towards the plot. The story has a great carachter building and world background , although a little slow paced, it is necessary in the beggining. Grammar is perfect from what I can tell and so far the update stability has been good.

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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornAuthor

Aa...I'm not even really that good!!

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

That's very good to hear, but on the other hand since this is a FF slow buildup means we need 50+ chapters to have a sliver of hope it doesn't drop. Good luck.

StarWriting
StarWritingLv10

Bro what are you even talking about!? This is pure abstract nonsense. It’s honestly hard to even call it a story. It’s just endless rambling…

BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

StarWriting:Bro what are you even talking about!? This is pure abstract nonsense. It’s honestly hard to even call it a story. It’s just endless rambling…
Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

is it harem?

Emmanuel_Capricorn:Aa...I'm not even really that good!!
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BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

No

Dethpool_Mlg:is it harem?
Mastarius
MastariusLv2

but this is not fanfic or novel it's author inner monologue that keeps on and on, nothing actually happened it was all in authors inner monologue LoL

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Egyanimefan
EgyanimefanLv1

If you're looking for a good MHA story, you've found it. In my opinion, this is one of the best MHA stories currently running. I will explain why. Let's start with one of the most basic things about writing a novel, which unfortunately needs to be mentioned because a lot of the stories here are already broken, and that is how real the story is, how much you feel like it's fictional or that it could happen if the world were like this, rather than like a 10 year old writing the interactions of the characters, obviously there's no problem with that here. What many people find objectionable, as I read the other reviews, is that the character acts like Bakugo despite being reincarnated, for those who find that a problem I can tell you, that the main character will have Bakugo's temper (which is the uniqueness and comedy of the story) but it will be explained properly why, or despite having Bakugo's temper he will not be Bakugo, he will act and behave differently than we are used to in the series. His world building is also good so far what he has added to the story so far is fine in my opinion. What is still often a question is harem or not harem. It's still unclear yet both are possible but I personally wish it wasn't harem (#teamTooru because the poor girl doesn't get the attention she deserves and I haven't even met (I don't think it's finished) yet no harem Tooru romantic fanfiction) I hope I've managed to catch some people's attention with this review or boost the author's enthusiasm a bit. I wish everyone a good read of the novel.

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