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HatefulAutumnBreez
HatefulAutumnBreezLv22yr
2022-09-24 13:22

Putting aside a few spelling errors, I'm really liking the story. Unlike some other mostly first-person perspective fanfcitions on this platforms, it actually.... Feels. There is personality. You can feel what the main character is feeling in a way. Not to mention the fact that the author completly nailed the explosive personality along with the personality of other characters. For the most part, the imagery is on point and the diction fits. It's also in somewhat of a slow-pace which is nice. Keep up the good work!

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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornAuthor

Somewhat detailed Review feels so good..It feels more genuine if you describe it...

214dnde
214dndeLv4

Question. Is he another deku simp?

Emmanuel_Capricorn:Somewhat detailed Review feels so good..It feels more genuine if you describe it...
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part_time_Otaku
part_time_OtakuLv2

friend with deku

214dnde:Question. Is he another deku simp?
214dnde
214dndeLv4

So he is

part_time_Otaku:friend with deku
Gilgamos
GilgamosLv14

I got to like chapter 3 before I dropped cause he has memories of another life but acts like a 4 year old

214dnde:So he is
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Egyanimefan
EgyanimefanLv1

If you're looking for a good MHA story, you've found it. In my opinion, this is one of the best MHA stories currently running. I will explain why. Let's start with one of the most basic things about writing a novel, which unfortunately needs to be mentioned because a lot of the stories here are already broken, and that is how real the story is, how much you feel like it's fictional or that it could happen if the world were like this, rather than like a 10 year old writing the interactions of the characters, obviously there's no problem with that here. What many people find objectionable, as I read the other reviews, is that the character acts like Bakugo despite being reincarnated, for those who find that a problem I can tell you, that the main character will have Bakugo's temper (which is the uniqueness and comedy of the story) but it will be explained properly why, or despite having Bakugo's temper he will not be Bakugo, he will act and behave differently than we are used to in the series. His world building is also good so far what he has added to the story so far is fine in my opinion. What is still often a question is harem or not harem. It's still unclear yet both are possible but I personally wish it wasn't harem (#teamTooru because the poor girl doesn't get the attention she deserves and I haven't even met (I don't think it's finished) yet no harem Tooru romantic fanfiction) I hope I've managed to catch some people's attention with this review or boost the author's enthusiasm a bit. I wish everyone a good read of the novel.

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