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dank_Pingu
dank_PinguLv32yr
2023-02-02 08:04

I don't want to sound like a bot but it's crazy just how good this novel is. It's very rare for an author to be putting this much planning and thought into their writing where chapters will hold clues and foreshadowing for another chapter 20 chapters down the line. It's fun as you piece together different stories by gathering pieces in different chapters. The characters are all very alive and unique. Johan is written very well and you can see him developing as he gets more and more sadistic. The novel will be a hit or miss depending on home much you relate to Johan and how amusing you find his actions. This is also a passion project by the author which makes it two times better, they even made a playlist to listen to. I'm still giving a 5 for updates since the author is making this thrilling story (which I'm sure takes up a lot of time) and living their life while keeping this novel free. The only downside I can find to this novel is that it might occasionally become confusing as since there are many different plotlines and the reader has the piece them together, you might find yourself lost. Still, a really good novel, and I recommend that you read it.

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Yummy review; thank you for it

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