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the_excalebars
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2023-12-03 12:15

Not to be weird or anything, but honestly i kinda wish i was crazy like johan and the observer, i kinda lost allmost most of my emotions. so it would be great to be so spontanious. im litterly like a robot sometimes so to be like them wouldnt be too bad.

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deathwriter
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I hope FBI reads your review and puts you on their watchlist

the_excalebars
the_excalebarsLv4

they betta watch out

deathwriter:I hope FBI reads your review and puts you on their watchlist
Cj_The_Depressed
Cj_The_DepressedLv4

author what happened to the novel?!

deathwriter:I hope FBI reads your review and puts you on their watchlist
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