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FlyingHorseLv51yr
2023-05-24 23:17

It's fine. Not super amazing, but not horrible either. It's non offensive. MC has no particular personality but is also not brain dead . The supporting cast.... Exists. But it also hasn't got any presence. The bar is very low, and it manages pass it

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FlyingHorseLv5

Update on my thoughts : The extensive detail is getting annoying I don't care that he got 15973 units if stone through trade. Half of you didn't even read that number. So it's pointless for it to be there, all it does is inflate the words In the same vain , having a tier level , subdivided into 3 sub levels sounds good , until you read your 5th "Green Bronze-Tier Elementary Grade " and your brain starts to want to filter it out

FlyingHorseLv5

!! 500 chapter update !! ->The author is still obsessed with numbers. Number of new recruits. People that advanced. Resources dropped. Sales. Everything that can have a number WILL have a number. ->the "potential" tab is absolutely pointless. The author tries to make it seem important but no one is ever limited by their potential . Their potential is just raised by one way or another ->there is a lot of repetition Messages that should be skipped cause they add nothing are still written in full even after the 10th time they appear. Also the summoning gate. It needs to be on the same level as the territory. That is established in the first few chapters. But the author keeps having him walk up to it, see what it needs to upgrade and realize that he needs to first upgrade the territory. Every single time. ->the side characters are just a little more fleshed out. They don't really have personality traits other than "loyal" but they don't blend in with one another.

Pedotosi_PhillipLv2

Try out this new amazing novel.I feel like this novel deserves more audience and support this is truly a wonderful novel and it would seem unfair if others don't get to read it.so I have decided to inform everyone of this awesome novel.although quite slow paced, the author has did a great work to make the novel seem fairly logical .truly a wonderful novel, and I hope that everyone who sees this novel.checks it out themselves to decide how truly interesting it is.maybe I am just bluffing or this is truly a great novel.the name of the novel is:Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled

Primordial_TwoLv5

how you got to 500 is amazing, only got to 382 and couldn't tolerate it anymore after the Nth plot device forgotten

FlyingHorse:!! 500 chapter update !! ->The author is still obsessed with numbers. Number of new recruits. People that advanced. Resources dropped. Sales. Everything that can have a number WILL have a number. ->the "potential" tab is absolutely pointless. The author tries to make it seem important but no one is ever limited by their potential . Their potential is just raised by one way or another ->there is a lot of repetition Messages that should be skipped cause they add nothing are still written in full even after the 10th time they appear. Also the summoning gate. It needs to be on the same level as the territory. That is established in the first few chapters. But the author keeps having him walk up to it, see what it needs to upgrade and realize that he needs to first upgrade the territory. Every single time. ->the side characters are just a little more fleshed out. They don't really have personality traits other than "loyal" but they don't blend in with one another.
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TomGuLv14
RoinujiLv11

-There are numerous typos in the story and the author often forgets plots that he himself defined. Things like a character appearing at the same time in two different places, the author copying and pasting a notification and forgetting to edit it, or even forgetting some effect of the protagonist's main skills. The author puts so much information and so many skills that he can't manage his own story. -The distance from the world makes no sense, sometimes the author shows the protagonist traveling to a certain location kilometers away with an army of thousands of soldiers and this march takes only a few hours, when in fact it should take days or weeks. -The protagonist accumulates countless useless skills that he never uses. And the skills are so scattered and random that it's evident the author didn't plan anything. -The protagonist's main class is the martial artist, but he has never fought a single opponent in 200 chapters and none of his skills have to do with his class. And even if "classes" exist in history, it is possible to learn skills that have nothing to do with the character class. -The drop system is broken and makes no sense, putting things like 0% drop just to conveniently work with the protagonist's talent: 100% drop rate. If the drop is 0% this item simply shouldn't exist. -The protagonist accumulates countless items with his 100% drop talent, but these items are so large in quantity that they just gather dust and are never used efficiently. (Like protagonist's skills) -The loyalty system makes no sense, literally, people are only loyal to the protagonist because of a talent that forces these people to become loyal, It has nothing to do with the protagonist's effort. They are like slaves with brainwashing. -No death consequences in battles. The protagonist has countless soldiers, but because of his talent he manages to revive them all whenever a battle takes place, so all soldiers are essentially immortal. In the end, I had fun reading the first few chapters, but after 200 chapters I got bored and felt like it wasn't worth it. (And I feel that the novel is written by AI)

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