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shv_luffy98
shv_luffy98Lv52yr
2022-12-03 18:17

Kinda exhausting to read. Seems a bit like another novel which was dropped, I wonder if it's the same author. There's annoying stuff like everyone praising MC in the world channel everytime, some people acting like they're the protagonist n considering MC as an enemy to trample on, an innocent girl who also has a legendary talent but being dependent on the MC, NPCs being impressed or being fanatical for some small things. Currently has about 300 chapters in the raws, so it might have gotten better or it's getting worse n worse n the author is still writing it, only to be dropped soon.

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shv_luffy98
shv_luffy98Lv5

lol.. the most powerful architect (retired but still as strong and capable), the most trusted advisor of the king (retired but still as capable) and the most powerful general(again retired but still as strong and capable) from the kingdom where MC is in.. all come to take refuge under MC.. it hasn't even been 7 days since he transmigrated.. all 3 of them are loyal and dedicated.. compared to their strengths what MC does is child's play.. buy they're all impressed af n becoming even more loyal to him

shv_luffy98
shv_luffy98Lv5

ex finance minister, imperial physician and the most wanted criminal in aurora Kingdom join in as well 🤣

shv_luffy98:lol.. the most powerful architect (retired but still as strong and capable), the most trusted advisor of the king (retired but still as capable) and the most powerful general(again retired but still as strong and capable) from the kingdom where MC is in.. all come to take refuge under MC.. it hasn't even been 7 days since he transmigrated.. all 3 of them are loyal and dedicated.. compared to their strengths what MC does is child's play.. buy they're all impressed af n becoming even more loyal to him
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

th 😃👍👍anks for the review and saving my time

DaoistMQc4Nw
DaoistMQc4NwLv12

as much as I hate the hyperbole in this novel, famous and capable people coming into his territory absolutely makes sense. He only get to recruit them only because it's a reward from the suprem will ( legendary rating ), so no, they didn't just happen to pass by and decided that they want to stay in mc's city. only by doing something worthy does the mc get to recruit them, it's the same as every character in this novel, if they got the reward ( legendary rating 1) , they will absolutely got to recruit one capable person.the amount of famous old man/ women in his territory is linear with how many legendary rating 1 he had

shv_luffy98:lol.. the most powerful architect (retired but still as strong and capable), the most trusted advisor of the king (retired but still as capable) and the most powerful general(again retired but still as strong and capable) from the kingdom where MC is in.. all come to take refuge under MC.. it hasn't even been 7 days since he transmigrated.. all 3 of them are loyal and dedicated.. compared to their strengths what MC does is child's play.. buy they're all impressed af n becoming even more loyal to him
Pedotosi_Phillip
Pedotosi_PhillipLv2

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-There are numerous typos in the story and the author often forgets plots that he himself defined. Things like a character appearing at the same time in two different places, the author copying and pasting a notification and forgetting to edit it, or even forgetting some effect of the protagonist's main skills. The author puts so much information and so many skills that he can't manage his own story. -The distance from the world makes no sense, sometimes the author shows the protagonist traveling to a certain location kilometers away with an army of thousands of soldiers and this march takes only a few hours, when in fact it should take days or weeks. -The protagonist accumulates countless useless skills that he never uses. And the skills are so scattered and random that it's evident the author didn't plan anything. -The protagonist's main class is the martial artist, but he has never fought a single opponent in 200 chapters and none of his skills have to do with his class. And even if "classes" exist in history, it is possible to learn skills that have nothing to do with the character class. -The drop system is broken and makes no sense, putting things like 0% drop just to conveniently work with the protagonist's talent: 100% drop rate. If the drop is 0% this item simply shouldn't exist. -The protagonist accumulates countless items with his 100% drop talent, but these items are so large in quantity that they just gather dust and are never used efficiently. (Like protagonist's skills) -The loyalty system makes no sense, literally, people are only loyal to the protagonist because of a talent that forces these people to become loyal, It has nothing to do with the protagonist's effort. They are like slaves with brainwashing. -No death consequences in battles. The protagonist has countless soldiers, but because of his talent he manages to revive them all whenever a battle takes place, so all soldiers are essentially immortal. In the end, I had fun reading the first few chapters, but after 200 chapters I got bored and felt like it wasn't worth it. (And I feel that the novel is written by AI)

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