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2023-01-01 09:13

While my rating may seem low I admit that I love this story. I have read up to chapter 330+ in mtl and enjoy.each new chapter. This is a story with the currently popular theme of Lords or everyone getting their own territory. the catch for this one is that the main character has a 100% drop enhancement for loot. while the story is slow, slow and even Slow! (at chapter 330 it has been 12 days) there is a fair amount of action. though the author had been becoming less hands on with the fights. The character design is mostly flat with anyone but the lead being forgotten until convenient. the positives are more about my love of systems and reading loot charts. Thanks for reading.

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Try out this new amazing novel.I feel like this novel deserves more audience and support this is truly a wonderful novel and it would seem unfair if others don't get to read it.so I have decided to inform everyone of this awesome novel.although quite slow paced, the author has did a great work to make the novel seem fairly logical .truly a wonderful novel, and I hope that everyone who sees this novel.checks it out themselves to decide how truly interesting it is.maybe I am just bluffing or this is truly a great novel.the name of the novel is:Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled

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-There are numerous typos in the story and the author often forgets plots that he himself defined. Things like a character appearing at the same time in two different places, the author copying and pasting a notification and forgetting to edit it, or even forgetting some effect of the protagonist's main skills. The author puts so much information and so many skills that he can't manage his own story. -The distance from the world makes no sense, sometimes the author shows the protagonist traveling to a certain location kilometers away with an army of thousands of soldiers and this march takes only a few hours, when in fact it should take days or weeks. -The protagonist accumulates countless useless skills that he never uses. And the skills are so scattered and random that it's evident the author didn't plan anything. -The protagonist's main class is the martial artist, but he has never fought a single opponent in 200 chapters and none of his skills have to do with his class. And even if "classes" exist in history, it is possible to learn skills that have nothing to do with the character class. -The drop system is broken and makes no sense, putting things like 0% drop just to conveniently work with the protagonist's talent: 100% drop rate. If the drop is 0% this item simply shouldn't exist. -The protagonist accumulates countless items with his 100% drop talent, but these items are so large in quantity that they just gather dust and are never used efficiently. (Like protagonist's skills) -The loyalty system makes no sense, literally, people are only loyal to the protagonist because of a talent that forces these people to become loyal, It has nothing to do with the protagonist's effort. They are like slaves with brainwashing. -No death consequences in battles. The protagonist has countless soldiers, but because of his talent he manages to revive them all whenever a battle takes place, so all soldiers are essentially immortal. In the end, I had fun reading the first few chapters, but after 200 chapters I got bored and felt like it wasn't worth it. (And I feel that the novel is written by AI)

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