The story is decent. Starts off like most HP stories. Real problems lie with the intent of the story. EVERYTHING is overshadowed by the authors hate of HP fanfics. it seaps into every part of this story. lots of whining and crying masked as some self righteous authority over what should and shouldn't be in a hp fanfic. he hates anything he deems not factual to hp Canon unless its his own brand of bull. as long as it fits in his narrative. Very hypocritical sometimes. if you were to extract all that from this story you'd find a decently developing story that has a bright future. but its still early and could develop in any direction. hopefully this author can let go of his hate. it ain't good to be mad! cheer up!
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First of all I don't hate fanfics. I've just read too many of them and none have satisfied me. Most of them have some of the stupidest nonsense written which annoys me. Anything that is not written in 7 books is not factual because most of it is made up by fans, most of those theories, I don't like so I will make my own speculations which I like better. I would like to keep those speculation realistic, that's why a 100 year old unicorn wand, which is somewhat special but in a realistic way. It's not hypocritical. MC is based of my own character. I donโt make friends easily, and am the definition of an introvert, that's why MC doesn't make friends. Lastly from reading your comments, I think we have some very different tastes for what we like in a fanfic. That's all.
His point still stands about the whining and what not on anything that isn't considered ''canon'' to you. Personally i think you could've just just not include any fanon in it and thats fine but i don't get all the crying about it but oh well.
Decima99:First of all I don't hate fanfics. I've just read too many of them and none have satisfied me. Most of them have some of the stupidest nonsense written which annoys me. Anything that is not written in 7 books is not factual because most of it is made up by fans, most of those theories, I don't like so I will make my own speculations which I like better. I would like to keep those speculation realistic, that's why a 100 year old unicorn wand, which is somewhat special but in a realistic way. It's not hypocritical. MC is based of my own character. I donโt make friends easily, and am the definition of an introvert, that's why MC doesn't make friends. Lastly from reading your comments, I think we have some very different tastes for what we like in a fanfic. That's all.
It's not whining, I'm just annoyed because people are repeatedly commenting that I've got some fact wrong or preaching me about what I've written is not wrong because it's written in this some wiki and some other fanfic
mow:His point still stands about the whining and what not on anything that isn't considered ''canon'' to you. Personally i think you could've just just not include any fanon in it and thats fine but i don't get all the crying about it but oh well.
